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Yesterday I woke up at 9 AM and was extreamly sleepy at the time. Consequently, I had to regain consciousness so that I could go down stairs and had breakfast with my family. I tried my best until I finally got up, and then went down the stairs to eat food. After eating the food, I went to shower with a smile on my face since the food was absolutely delicious.
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Yesterday I woke up at 9 AM and was extreamly sleepy at the time. Consequently, I had to regain consciousness so that I could go down stairs and had breakfast with my family. I tried my best until I finally got up, and then went down the stairs to eat food. After eating the food, I went to shower with a smile on my face since the food was absolutely delicious.