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When I was 6 years old. I went to Nakhon Ratchasima with my family. We stayed in a hotel where the mountains surround. The first day, we went to Farm Chokchai. I was excited because it was the first time that I saw horses and cows closely. While my older sister was feeding horses and cows, I has a chance to ride a horse. Next Day, My father took us to Thongsomboon Club. In this place have many adventure activities. I drove an ATV, four wheel motorcycle that drove pass the section. Each section have barrier. I felt fun. After that, we went to the vineyard not far away from club. We had taken many photos and had bought souvenirs before came back home.This is my best vocation from my.childhood.
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When I was 6 years old. I went to Nakhon Ratchasima with my family. We stayed in a hotel where the mountains surround. The first day, we went to Farm Chokchai. I was excited because it was the first time that I saw horses and cows closely. While my older sister was feeding horses and cows, I has a chance to ride a horse. Next Day, My father took us to Thongsomboon Club. In this place have many adventure activities. I drove an ATV, four wheel motorcycle that drove pass the section. Each section have barrier. I felt fun. After that, we went to the vineyard not far away from club. We had taken many photos and had bought souvenirs before came back home.This is my best vocation from my.childhood.
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