ใครเก่งอังกฤษช่วยตรวจสอบ writing ให้หน่อยค่ะ ว่าถูกไวยกรณ์ไหม ครูให้เขียน narrative ส่งค่ะ
ขอความกรุณาด้วยนะคะ ไม่ค่อยมั่นใจ
THE ACCIDENT
My story had occurred during midterm examination in this semester. I answered the phone from my mother and she told me that “Here was motorcycle accident near our house. A man, drove a motorcycle very fast and didn't wear a helmet, crashed a big rock. I didn't know that he still lived or died.” She told me with scary sound and explained about that situation. She heard a noise and went outside to see what happened. Suddenly, she saw a person lay prone and saw blood from his head. Then an ambulance came to the scene and brought him to a hospital. Three day later, I went back to my house and asked about him. My mother told me that he had died since the day that was accident. I was shock and sorry about him. I hop
sted in peace.
So we should live without carelessness and always have consciousness.
ใครเก่งอังกฤษช่วยตรวจสอบ writing ให้หน่อยค่ะ ว่าถูกไวยกรณ์ไหม ครูให้เขียน narrative ส่งค่ะ
ขอความกรุณาด้วยนะคะ ไม่ค่อยมั่นใจ
My story had occurred during midterm examination in this semester. I answered the phone from my mother and she told me that “Here was motorcycle accident near our house. A man, drove a motorcycle very fast and didn't wear a helmet, crashed a big rock. I didn't know that he still lived or died.” She told me with scary sound and explained about that situation. She heard a noise and went outside to see what happened. Suddenly, she saw a person lay prone and saw blood from his head. Then an ambulance came to the scene and brought him to a hospital. Three day later, I went back to my house and asked about him. My mother told me that he had died since the day that was accident. I was shock and sorry about him. I hop
So we should live without carelessness and always have consciousness.