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As a child, I was afraid of Thunderstorm for many reasons. I could remember that I shaked like a leaf, and quaked in my boots. The first reason was that I was afraid of thundersound because it roared too loud instantly, and sounded like a huge bomb would be exploding. When I heard thunder, I started screaming blue murder. Sometimes, I cried because of fear. Another reason was that I was afraid of lightning because the flash striked like it would hit my head. After that, the storm would be coming. It was the signal that I should aware myself. The last reason was that I was afraid storm because it could devastate the houses, and always brought the hard rain. Sometimes, the storm made power out, and I was afraid of darkness. While I could not see anything, I imagined anything that made me feel worried. I could not live alone because I would be scared out of my wits ;for example, I cried unconsciously and sceamed until losing my voice. In the end, thunderstorm was too horrible for me.
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As a child, I was afraid of thunderstorm for many reasons. I could remember that I shook like a leaf, and quaked in my shoes. The first reason was that I was afraid of thunder sound. It roared too loud and instantly, sounded like a huge bomb exploding. Whenever I heard thunder, I started screaming. Sometimes, I cried because of fear. Another reason was that I was afraid of lightning, that it would hit my head. After lightning, the storm would come. It was the signal that I should brace myself. The last reason was I think thunderstorm could destroy houses, and brought heavy rain. Sometimes, the thunderstorm caused power blackout. I was afraid of darkness. While I could not see anything, I imagined things that made me afraid. I could not live alone because I would be too scared. If I was alone, I would  cry and scream so much that l lost my voice. Thunderstorm was too horrible for me.
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