The Horrible Thunderstorm
The severe thunderstorm is horrible because the sky begins to darken, and the thunder roars extremely loud; moreover, it sounds like a huge bomb is exploding. When I hear the thunder, I start screaming blue murder. Sometimes, I cry because I am terrifically afraid of it. The yellow lightning strikes like it will hit right on my head. After that, the storm is coming. It is the dangerous signal that I should be aware of myself. The storm can devastate houses, and always bring the heavy rain. Ultimately, the storm makes power cut, and I am afraid of the darkness. While I cannot see anything, I imagine that I am in danger. I cannot bear being alone among thunderstorm because I will be scared out of my wits; for example, I cry unconsciously and scream until I lose my voice. In the end, thunderstorm threatens me really bad.
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The severe thunderstorm is horrible because the sky begins to darken, and the thunder roars extremely loud; moreover, it sounds like a huge bomb is exploding. When I hear the thunder, I start screaming blue murder. Sometimes, I cry because I am terrifically afraid of it. The yellow lightning strikes like it will hit right on my head. After that, the storm is coming. It is the dangerous signal that I should be aware of myself. The storm can devastate houses, and always bring the heavy rain. Ultimately, the storm makes power cut, and I am afraid of the darkness. While I cannot see anything, I imagine that I am in danger. I cannot bear being alone among thunderstorm because I will be scared out of my wits; for example, I cry unconsciously and scream until I lose my voice. In the end, thunderstorm threatens me really bad.
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