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                                                                       Moving to America
         There is a saying, “ The falling of yesterday are the learning of tomorrow ”. This quote is wonderful and inspiring for whomever is afraid of making a mistake. I never thought one day I had to take this quote as my motivation in life. I could still recognize the time when my parents told me to move to from my hometown to Florida. In that moment I knew that life was changing in someway. I was so excited and wondering which way would my life go. Moving to the unknown place is the biggest challenge. It has taught the significant lesson that I would never learn in my own country.
          For seventeen years, I had been living with godmother’s family in Thailand. My parents left the country to find the new job since I was nine years old. My life was surrounded with love from family and friends. They were always taking care and helping me. I depend on godmother’s family too much. It seemed like I could not handle the things and get it done by my own. Life started to change when I got a phone call from my parents in Florida. Their voices went though the line saying that they desire me to move in with them. Because I was becoming a teenager and they concerned if someone would persuade me to do the bad thing. Therefore, they would be relieve if I move to get closer to them. After the conversation had finished. My feeling was so overwhelmed. Everything in my mind was in turmoil. I never thought I would have gotten a greater opportunity like this. I think it is time to find what I really need in life. I had to open the eyes to the new vision.
          On August 22, 2015, arrived at the airport in Florida. I had time to adjust myself to the new environment for two weeks. After that i had to go to public school. It scared me that there were a thousands of students in school. As my senior year in American high school. It was a hard time for me who lacked of English skills. Everything went by so quickly. I had to get everything in school done within a year and prepare myself for the college. Even though, I was not ready for the college.I did not even know how I could survive from this situation. I knew the biggest problem for me is language. Neither was I able to communicate with anybody nor understand what they were trying to say . I decided to come to this country So, I must face the consequence which were going to happen. I would had to overcome this obstacle. 
As time passed my English skill started to improve slowly. Everyone I knew such as parent, supportive teacher, or principal. All of those people keep encouraging me and teaching me in every way they could. That was the first reason why my English has improved. The second reason was I keep motivating myself.I stayed after school everyday for tutoring and reading skill. Furthermore, when i came back home I still had the responsibility to study on  my own. As a result of these progress I could understand more about what other people were saying or asking me. The importance thing that I did in my life were graduate from high school and pass the SAT test.
          It has been one year since I decide to move to America. Whenever I look back on that time. I realized that my life changed for the better way. I have learned so many thing not just improving language.But also, it taught me how to live and do everything without anyone's help. I grew up in the unexpected way. All the things I have been through are valuable lesson that I could not find anywhere else. All the experience have taught me to be more confident. They made me know that learning from failure is the first step to be successful in life. Now I know what is my life goal and what I have to do in the next days to achieve the goals.
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