ผมอยากขอความเห็นเรื่อง ความถูกต้องของ Grammar และ การใช้ Punctuation ใน introduction ของ essay ที่ผมเขียนหน่อยครับ ว่าใช้ได้ถกต้อง และสื่อความได้ชัดเจนไหมครับ เพื่อผมจะพัฒนาและปรับปรุงการเขียนให้ดียิ่งขึ้นครับ ขอบคุณครับ
The reading and the lecture are both about the memoir of Chevalier de Seingalt’s life and adventures. The author of the reading casts doubt that his memoir might not be accurate and states that he might blend the fact of his life events to make it more exciting; and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor is of the opinion that though not every memoir is a hundred percent accurate, Chevalier's memoir is considered overall accurate and a reliable historical source. She continues by showing how the reasons in the reading are flawed and refutes each of the author’s response.
อยากขอความช่วยเหลือตรวจสอบ Essay Task 1 TOEFL สั้นๆ และขอคำแนะนำเพิ่มเติมครับ
The reading and the lecture are both about the memoir of Chevalier de Seingalt’s life and adventures. The author of the reading casts doubt that his memoir might not be accurate and states that he might blend the fact of his life events to make it more exciting; and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor is of the opinion that though not every memoir is a hundred percent accurate, Chevalier's memoir is considered overall accurate and a reliable historical source. She continues by showing how the reasons in the reading are flawed and refutes each of the author’s response.