Everyone wants the love from family, friends and people around you, especially the children. Some family is happy, understanding of each other, laugh together every day, and they received good suggestion from their parents. But sometime, some children don’t have these events because their parents set the hope with them too much. It became break their children and it makes many problem.
In the first problem is social. When the children have many pressures, it makes them take life so seriously too much. Some children do the bad thing for survival, such as cheating in the test for good grade because they want compliment from their parents. Some children don’t help their friends because they fear that others will score better than themselves. These actions will have an affect on them extremely. It makes them don’t have friends, society, or societies may be dislike them and it makes them unhappy for the rest of their lives.
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In the first problem is social. When the children have many pressures, it makes them take life so seriously too much. Some children do the bad thing for survival, such as cheating in the test for good grade because they want compliment from their parents. Some children don’t help their friends because they fear that others will score better than themselves. These actions will have an affect on them extremely. It makes them don’t have friends, society, or societies may be dislike them and it makes them unhappy for the rest of their lives.