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Taylor Swift is my idol. She is my inspiration and one of my dreams is to meet her. She was born on December 13, 1989. She is an American singer-songwriter. One of the most popular artists. She is known for narrative songs about her personal life.
    Taylor Swift is very beautiful. She is well-built and fair. She is 180 centimeters tall. She has short straight blonde hair. Her face is so flawless. She has a caltrop-shaped mouth and usually puts on red lipstick and her red lip is became her character. She has beautiful blue eyes and prominent nose.
    She is so awesome and good artist. She always take care her fans, her friends, and people who she loved. She always donated many dollars for her fans and foundation and sent a gift for her fans in special occasions. She likes to play guitar and write a songs about her life.
    I love how she changes in some ways but never forget who she is like her quote says “I never to change so much that people recognize me” . I love the ways who she is so much. She very good artist and have a good attitude. All of this is the reason why Taylor Swift is my idol.

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