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To Whom It May Concern,
I am writing to provide more information regarding my application for a tourist Schengen Visa at The Austrian Embassy Bangkok.
My name is .................... I am a currently third year student in ......... University. My purpose of travel in Austria is tourism, I always fascinated of German language, Traditional food, History, Arts, Classical Music and European architecture. Since I took a short German course at Goethe institute 2 years ago, this has encouraged me more and more to explore Europe, especially in Austria.
I have met my partner, Mr...... via Facebook and video call on Skype over 2 years ago. After being friend for couple months, then we have been in relationship together since 23 April 2012. He visited me at the first time on October 2012 and had a trip together in Chiang Rai, where I currently study, Chiang Mai and Bangkok. Then on February 2013, he came back again to stay with me longer in Chiang Rai and Bangkok, and also had a trip with my family in Hua Hin. The latest of his trip in Thailand was on December 2013 – January 2014, we went to the King’s birthday celebration with my family. Then we flew to Chiang Rai for me to join the class before the Mid-term break and New Year’s holiday. We spent a wee k in Phuket together near Patong Beach to swim and sightseeing around, then we flew back to Bangkok to celebrate on Christmas Eve and New Year’s family party as pictures attached. For his 3 trips to Thailand in 2 years, he stayed at my house in Patum-Thani province with my parents, which close to Bangkok for 20 minutes drive. They are very kind to my partner like he is their son. I also enclosed some photographs as an evidence to prove of the relationship between Mr. .......... and me.
According to the upcoming trip, he has invited me to visit Austria for the opportunity to meet his family and explore Vienna and beside countries. We also plan to go for one-day trip at Bratislava, Slovakia, which is 55 kilometers away from Vienna. On the 5th until 6th of August, we’re heading to Prague, Czech Republic and stay for a night at Hotel Prague Star in the inner city to see Charles’ bridge and other beautiful places in Prague. On 22nd until 25th of August, we’re heading to Munich, Germany and stay at Smart Stay hotel station to sightseeing and watch football training at FC Bayern Munich headquarter in Säbener Straße.
My plan is to travel to arrive in Austria on 1st of August, then leave Vienna on 31st of August and arrive in Bangkok in the next day. My travel itinerary is attached for more information. During I’m staying with Mr. ........... in Vienna. He will provide me for food and apartment to stay, for the financial expenses. As the opportunity for gaining more experiences to work with people after I graduate. My mother, Mrs........................, will be responsible for most of expenses including transportation and other items related.
I would like to state that I am very aware of the visa regulations and have to intent of violating these visa rules. I have every intention to return to my home in Thailand after a-month trip to Austria and beside countries. After the trip, I have to get back to my university to start first semester of the fourth year on the 3rd of September. In addition, I would like to be a volunteer for international student orientation at my university and study hard for applying to be the third class diplomat on next year. Therefore, please kindly consider giving me an opportunity for my short trip in Austria and besides countries.
I hope the above information covers all require you may need for my visa application. After you have had an opportunity to review my documents and examine the enclosed detail documents of this trip. If there are any further information required, kindly contact me on mobile phone number ....... or by e-mail : .........
Faithfully yours,
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หมายเหตุ : สมควรมั้ยคะที่จะเขียนว่าเจอกันในเฟซและสไกป์หากันหลายเดือนก่อนมาเป็นแฟนกันค่ะ คือมันเป็นความจริง เราก็ไม่อยากโกหกด้วยค่ะ
หมายเหตุ 2 : มีผู้รู้ท่านหนึ่งในห้องนี้แนะนำมาว่าเวลาเขียน ให้ใส่เป็น Partner เพราะดูจริงจังกว่า Boyfriend, แบบนี้เจ้าหน้าที่จะมองออกมั้ยคะ ว่ามันน่าเชื่อถือจริงๆ หรือต้องขึ้นอยู่กับอารมณ์คนพิจารณา application ของเราด้วยคะ?
หมายเหตุ 3 : เคยถามหลายครั้งแต่ไม่เคยได้คำตอบที่ตรงคำถาม คือเราจะให้เขารับผิดชอบแค่ที่อยู่กับมื้ออาหารพอ ค่าตั๋ว ค่าเดินทางไปไหนๆ คุณแม่เราจะเป็นสปอนเซอร์ให้ และเราก็มีเงินเก็บบ้างค่ะ 1x,xxx บาท เคสแบบนี้เคยมีมั้ยคะ ฝั่งนู้นมี จม.เชิญ(พิมพ์เองพร้อมลายเซ็น), Proof of Resident ออกโดยเขตที่เขาอยู่, เอกสารสัญญาเช่าอพาร์ตเม้นท์, สำเนาพาสปอร์ตค่ะ
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เข้ามาตรวจทานและช่วยเกลาหน่อยค่ะ
ภาษาอังกฤษของเราไม่ได้เข้าขั้นโปรมาก แต่อาศัยแหล่งต่างๆ แล้วมาดัดแปลงตามแพลนของเราอีกทีค่ะ
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To Whom It May Concern,
I am writing to provide more information regarding my application for a tourist Schengen Visa at The Austrian Embassy Bangkok.
My name is .................... I am a currently third year student in ......... University. My purpose of travel in Austria is tourism, I always fascinated of German language, Traditional food, History, Arts, Classical Music and European architecture. Since I took a short German course at Goethe institute 2 years ago, this has encouraged me more and more to explore Europe, especially in Austria.
I have met my partner, Mr...... via Facebook and video call on Skype over 2 years ago. After being friend for couple months, then we have been in relationship together since 23 April 2012. He visited me at the first time on October 2012 and had a trip together in Chiang Rai, where I currently study, Chiang Mai and Bangkok. Then on February 2013, he came back again to stay with me longer in Chiang Rai and Bangkok, and also had a trip with my family in Hua Hin. The latest of his trip in Thailand was on December 2013 – January 2014, we went to the King’s birthday celebration with my family. Then we flew to Chiang Rai for me to join the class before the Mid-term break and New Year’s holiday. We spent a wee k in Phuket together near Patong Beach to swim and sightseeing around, then we flew back to Bangkok to celebrate on Christmas Eve and New Year’s family party as pictures attached. For his 3 trips to Thailand in 2 years, he stayed at my house in Patum-Thani province with my parents, which close to Bangkok for 20 minutes drive. They are very kind to my partner like he is their son. I also enclosed some photographs as an evidence to prove of the relationship between Mr. .......... and me.
According to the upcoming trip, he has invited me to visit Austria for the opportunity to meet his family and explore Vienna and beside countries. We also plan to go for one-day trip at Bratislava, Slovakia, which is 55 kilometers away from Vienna. On the 5th until 6th of August, we’re heading to Prague, Czech Republic and stay for a night at Hotel Prague Star in the inner city to see Charles’ bridge and other beautiful places in Prague. On 22nd until 25th of August, we’re heading to Munich, Germany and stay at Smart Stay hotel station to sightseeing and watch football training at FC Bayern Munich headquarter in Säbener Straße.
My plan is to travel to arrive in Austria on 1st of August, then leave Vienna on 31st of August and arrive in Bangkok in the next day. My travel itinerary is attached for more information. During I’m staying with Mr. ........... in Vienna. He will provide me for food and apartment to stay, for the financial expenses. As the opportunity for gaining more experiences to work with people after I graduate. My mother, Mrs........................, will be responsible for most of expenses including transportation and other items related.
I would like to state that I am very aware of the visa regulations and have to intent of violating these visa rules. I have every intention to return to my home in Thailand after a-month trip to Austria and beside countries. After the trip, I have to get back to my university to start first semester of the fourth year on the 3rd of September. In addition, I would like to be a volunteer for international student orientation at my university and study hard for applying to be the third class diplomat on next year. Therefore, please kindly consider giving me an opportunity for my short trip in Austria and besides countries.
I hope the above information covers all require you may need for my visa application. After you have had an opportunity to review my documents and examine the enclosed detail documents of this trip. If there are any further information required, kindly contact me on mobile phone number ....... or by e-mail : .........
Faithfully yours,
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หมายเหตุ : สมควรมั้ยคะที่จะเขียนว่าเจอกันในเฟซและสไกป์หากันหลายเดือนก่อนมาเป็นแฟนกันค่ะ คือมันเป็นความจริง เราก็ไม่อยากโกหกด้วยค่ะ
หมายเหตุ 2 : มีผู้รู้ท่านหนึ่งในห้องนี้แนะนำมาว่าเวลาเขียน ให้ใส่เป็น Partner เพราะดูจริงจังกว่า Boyfriend, แบบนี้เจ้าหน้าที่จะมองออกมั้ยคะ ว่ามันน่าเชื่อถือจริงๆ หรือต้องขึ้นอยู่กับอารมณ์คนพิจารณา application ของเราด้วยคะ?
หมายเหตุ 3 : เคยถามหลายครั้งแต่ไม่เคยได้คำตอบที่ตรงคำถาม คือเราจะให้เขารับผิดชอบแค่ที่อยู่กับมื้ออาหารพอ ค่าตั๋ว ค่าเดินทางไปไหนๆ คุณแม่เราจะเป็นสปอนเซอร์ให้ และเราก็มีเงินเก็บบ้างค่ะ 1x,xxx บาท เคสแบบนี้เคยมีมั้ยคะ ฝั่งนู้นมี จม.เชิญ(พิมพ์เองพร้อมลายเซ็น), Proof of Resident ออกโดยเขตที่เขาอยู่, เอกสารสัญญาเช่าอพาร์ตเม้นท์, สำเนาพาสปอร์ตค่ะ
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