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My favorite holiday is Dream World in Bangkok for three reason.
First, I and my friends read hard book on the final exam because we want a high score for pass all the subject.
I think about trip to rest. So, we agreed to go to Dream World after final exam.
Condition for someone gets the highest score, must play Tornado alone.
After final exam, we went to Dream World when we arrived, everyone excited with theme park.
It is a long time that didn't go a theme park. It made me feel back to a child again.
The theme park have many rides. For example. It's has Tornado, Giant's House, Super Splash, Sky Coaster, Hurricane etc.
We played many the rides. It's very have fun. We spent all day at the theme park, but we never feel tired.
At 4.00 pm, the score of all the subject was announced.
Everyone looks score themselves and points to rank who gets the highest score. It's me. I feel great and bad in the same time.
Also, I must go to play Tornado alone. before, i will go up to play. My friends tell me that Good Luck!, God Bless.
I feel that this rides is not really common. When i go up and staff tell player countdown. 5 4 3 2 started!
It slowly rotate to the left and right slowly in a circular motion. In later times it spins faster.
At the end, I feel bad about it. I think, I will not play it all the life.
At night, Dream World had a parade and fireworks show.
The fireworks seemed to last forever, with burst of vivid colors and brilliant visual effects dancing in the sky.
After the last show ended, we go back to dorm.
In conclusion, It's was amazing trip in my holiday. I will never forget it in my life.
My favorite holiday! (ใครเก่งภาษาอังกฤษช่วยเข้ามาหน่อย)
My favorite holiday is Dream World in Bangkok for three reason.
First, I and my friends read hard book on the final exam because we want a high score for pass all the subject.
I think about trip to rest. So, we agreed to go to Dream World after final exam.
Condition for someone gets the highest score, must play Tornado alone.
After final exam, we went to Dream World when we arrived, everyone excited with theme park.
It is a long time that didn't go a theme park. It made me feel back to a child again.
The theme park have many rides. For example. It's has Tornado, Giant's House, Super Splash, Sky Coaster, Hurricane etc.
We played many the rides. It's very have fun. We spent all day at the theme park, but we never feel tired.
At 4.00 pm, the score of all the subject was announced.
Everyone looks score themselves and points to rank who gets the highest score. It's me. I feel great and bad in the same time.
Also, I must go to play Tornado alone. before, i will go up to play. My friends tell me that Good Luck!, God Bless.
I feel that this rides is not really common. When i go up and staff tell player countdown. 5 4 3 2 started!
It slowly rotate to the left and right slowly in a circular motion. In later times it spins faster.
At the end, I feel bad about it. I think, I will not play it all the life.
At night, Dream World had a parade and fireworks show.
The fireworks seemed to last forever, with burst of vivid colors and brilliant visual effects dancing in the sky.
After the last show ended, we go back to dorm.
In conclusion, It's was amazing trip in my holiday. I will never forget it in my life.