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Myself...

Hello I many is Lisa. I'm 30 years old. I was born in Bkk. I graduated from ABC University with a degree in Bachelor of Arts, the major was a business English and minor was a Marketing.
After graduated I had studied 2 English courses, one was a intermediate level of communication and another was a advance level.
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My work experience...

I have been working as a secretary for 6 years ; The first job I had worked as a assistant secretary at a Public Organization for a year. Then I had worked as a project secretary at Software company for 2 years. At present I have been working as a secretary to Construction Manager and Construction Director for 3 years.
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