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Mind Depths
Every person's personalities cannot be determined by how they be have in front of a large number of people end each personality that is expressed may affect those around. Some people may rever show another side of their personality, to anyone mind depth. We are going to write about Ice, my friend from class five. I think person has more than one or two or maybe three outer personalities and call then is "my depth".
An example of his positive personality that his dedication to work. We thought he was a very sociable person, for example, when he stays in public, he always taks with strangens and everybody kindly, for instance, if the school has various activities he will be able to talk to people at school without being embarrassed. Also, when there are school activities, he is always able to make new friends. whether they it's a juniars. or adassmates.
A second example, of his prisonality is that he gives importance to friend ship. When his friends are in trouble, he always comforts them well and always listens to them, he always tries to entertain and make his friends laugh ,e.g., speaks, talks and manners. When his friends need some help.
He can also goes to eat or go anywhere with friend in a friendly manner.
A final example of his personality is introverted, Actually, what we suspected from the beginning was a personality with more than just one and two or maybe three as we call it. "Mind depths" we've been observing it all along. He was once said to be hilarious and liked to entertain others,but sometimes we saw him laugh about things that should be sad, For instance, there was a mistake in his work, but he just sad there smiling and laughing,
that sometimes we cannot look at people just from the personality that they reveal to us because behind the scenes they may have experienced something or what lies "Mind depths".
In summerize, he can get along with people at school easily because he knows how to approach ather people various methods. Which in the real mind depths is the second personality, but that doesn't mean it's not a good thing because actually, having that kind of personality Creates happiness for yourself and does not harm those around.
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Mind Depths
Every person's personalities cannot be determined by how they be have in front of a large number of people end each personality that is expressed may affect those around. Some people may rever show another side of their personality, to anyone mind depth. We are going to write about Ice, my friend from class five. I think person has more than one or two or maybe three outer personalities and call then is "my depth".
An example of his positive personality that his dedication to work. We thought he was a very sociable person, for example, when he stays in public, he always taks with strangens and everybody kindly, for instance, if the school has various activities he will be able to talk to people at school without being embarrassed. Also, when there are school activities, he is always able to make new friends. whether they it's a juniars. or adassmates.
A second example, of his prisonality is that he gives importance to friend ship. When his friends are in trouble, he always comforts them well and always listens to them, he always tries to entertain and make his friends laugh ,e.g., speaks, talks and manners. When his friends need some help.
He can also goes to eat or go anywhere with friend in a friendly manner.
A final example of his personality is introverted, Actually, what we suspected from the beginning was a personality with more than just one and two or maybe three as we call it. "Mind depths" we've been observing it all along. He was once said to be hilarious and liked to entertain others,but sometimes we saw him laugh about things that should be sad, For instance, there was a mistake in his work, but he just sad there smiling and laughing,
that sometimes we cannot look at people just from the personality that they reveal to us because behind the scenes they may have experienced something or what lies "Mind depths".
In summerize, he can get along with people at school easily because he knows how to approach ather people various methods. Which in the real mind depths is the second personality, but that doesn't mean it's not a good thing because actually, having that kind of personality Creates happiness for yourself and does not harm those around.