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-Juan Ignacio Reyes González is a Paralympic athlete.
  - He's from Mexico.
  -Born on December 15, 1981 in Mexico City  Mexico.
  -Juan Ignacio Reyes, master of S4 swimming and creator of the legendary Paralympic swimmer who broke the world record with just one leg.
  - In 1998, making his first world title at the World Swimming Championships, a 17-year-old backstroke specialist completed his first world title in Christchurch, New Zealand.
  -He lost both his arms and his left leg.
  -At the age of 5, he was seriously ill from a severe embolism in both his arms and left leg. As a result, he had to lose three vital organs in his life, namely both his arms and his left leg. But he continued to live a meaningful life. And swimming played a part in pushing him to push his limits without compromising on physical disabilities.
  -Due to bodily defects in the arms, legs, lower legs, hands, shoulders, including brain disorders that make the muscles of the whole body difficult to move, which physical defects are a hindrance to the highest sporting events.
  -He transcends the brutality of those destiny and pushes himself to push the limits without clinging to physical impairments, practicing swimming seriously. until becoming a para athlete  or athletes with physical disabilities.
  -Learned that no matter how hard we face obstacles in life, we just don't give up. We were able to get through all the troubles, like swimming through all the troubles to become Juan Ignacio Reyes's World Paralympic Pool.
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