เรามีงานต้องส่งคุณครูพรุ่งนี้ค่ะ แต่เราไม่เก่งเรื่องไวยากรณ์ จะศึกษาเขียนเองก็กลัวจะผิดอีก เราอยากขอคำแนะนำในการแก้ไขข้อความอะนนี้หน่อยค่ะ ว่าเราควรแก้ไขยังไงบ้าง ควรเปลี่ยนอะไรให้มันถูกต้องขึ้นสักนิดนึงก็ยังดีค่ะ
Billions of people live all over the world. The two most populous countries in the world are China and India. The reason why China and India are the most populous countries in the world is because of their culture, which encourages the birth of many children in order to have the labour force to drive the economy and society in their countries. China is a country with many rivers. This makes it easy to feed large populations. By the middle of the 20th century, China's population was too large. Therefore, the government passed a law that prohibited having more than one child per family. In India, however, there is no such case. India has no fertility laws. So, the population is growing rapidly. This means that the national resources are not enough to sustain life, and there will be big problems later.
ช่วยแนะนำเรื่องไวยากรณ์ภาษาอังกฤษหน่อยค่ะ
Billions of people live all over the world. The two most populous countries in the world are China and India. The reason why China and India are the most populous countries in the world is because of their culture, which encourages the birth of many children in order to have the labour force to drive the economy and society in their countries. China is a country with many rivers. This makes it easy to feed large populations. By the middle of the 20th century, China's population was too large. Therefore, the government passed a law that prohibited having more than one child per family. In India, however, there is no such case. India has no fertility laws. So, the population is growing rapidly. This means that the national resources are not enough to sustain life, and there will be big problems later.