คุณครูมอบหมายให้เขียน opinion essay เรื่อง "What do you think about online learning?" มาค่ะ เราไม่มั่นใจใน grammar ของตัวเองเลย ยังไงก็รบกวนด้วยนะคะ ขอบพระคุณผู้ช่วยเหลือล่วงหน้าค่ะ
Nowadays, the COVID-19 is in pandemic all over the world, for this reason, many schools have to find a way to teach the students in this situation. That's why students and teachers are trying to normalize online learning. However, in my view, it's hard to learn properly.
Firstly, students can't focus on the online class for a long time because there is too much disturbance and many problems while learning. For example, some students have lost signal the internet for some reason, the atmosphere around the house is inappropriate for learning and the communication could be misunderstood between teacher and student. Similarly, these problems affect students' grades, their passion, and their mental health as well.
Secondly, these problems also affect students' mental health, plus if they don't have a passion for studying, their grades could be getting worse. In addition to that, some parents had a chance to concerned about their child's grades and going to ask what is happening with their child and trying to solve the problem together, but some of them are not. Lastly, the human being is a social animal, said Aristotle. They have to go outside to interact with people. Only living in a house could make them depressed.
In conclusion, personally online learning has both disadvantages and advantages, in this pandemic, it's hard to organize the things that don't use to. The best solution to solve this problem is the support from the relevant agencies, the school, the teachers, and the parents. I hope one day students and teachers are going back to school to interact in class together again.
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Nowadays, the COVID-19 is in pandemic all over the world, for this reason, many schools have to find a way to teach the students in this situation. That's why students and teachers are trying to normalize online learning. However, in my view, it's hard to learn properly.
Firstly, students can't focus on the online class for a long time because there is too much disturbance and many problems while learning. For example, some students have lost signal the internet for some reason, the atmosphere around the house is inappropriate for learning and the communication could be misunderstood between teacher and student. Similarly, these problems affect students' grades, their passion, and their mental health as well.
Secondly, these problems also affect students' mental health, plus if they don't have a passion for studying, their grades could be getting worse. In addition to that, some parents had a chance to concerned about their child's grades and going to ask what is happening with their child and trying to solve the problem together, but some of them are not. Lastly, the human being is a social animal, said Aristotle. They have to go outside to interact with people. Only living in a house could make them depressed.
In conclusion, personally online learning has both disadvantages and advantages, in this pandemic, it's hard to organize the things that don't use to. The best solution to solve this problem is the support from the relevant agencies, the school, the teachers, and the parents. I hope one day students and teachers are going back to school to interact in class together again.