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My hometown is in Hainan and it is a beautiful province.
In spring, industrious farmers they sow in the fields. At noon, people had lunch at home, and the children were play hide and seek in the fields, and they went home to have a nap.
Summer evening, people moved the table to the courtyard outside the sky to eat, the cool wind blowing, the birds flying home in the sky been their friends. After dinner, people backed in the sun in the shade.
Autumn, is the harvest season, people are busy picking fruit and harvesting wheat. Jackfruit hangs in trees one after another. Farmers pick up fruit, while appreciating how delicious and sweet their fruit is.
Winter, it is different from other places, in my memory, there is no cold winter here and winter is always so warm.
The countryside is so beautiful and lovely all year round. Beautiful state, I love my hometown.
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