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I am writing this to apply for a position of Thai language teacher at xxxx as an advertised on xxxx .

I started teaching Thai language to my foreign friends by doing language exchange in a language club at the university when I was doing my first year of bachelor’s degree. I found that teaching is the thing that makes me happy.

Then I worked as a private tutor for my part time job, tutoring students from age 4 to 16 in many subjects namely xxxx. I had been tutoring students since I was in the second year of my bachelor’s degree until I graduated. After that I was a teaching assistant at xxxx for one academic year, and that fulfill my dream and I became even more passionate working with children since then.

I decided to come to [name of the country] to study in [name of the faculty] and I chose [name of major] because it would like to broaden my view in different aspect of education. Not only how to teach the children, but to think critically in the deeper aspect to gain more understanding in the specific points of views and adapt those ideas and the methods of thinking in the real world.

Moreover, I would like to experience and understand more about the country and [name of] culture. Studying abroad gives me beyond what I expected before. I put myself in different culture with my local and international friends, that helps me to be more flexible person, more patient and tolerant, and can adjust myself in any circumstances.

I am applying for Thai language teacher job because I would like to gain more challenging in my career path and have more responsibilities to reach my career goal.

I plan to go back to Thailand in xxx 2019. My plan after going back to Thailand is to apply for a teacher training to get a teaching license and to reach another step of my career.

I do believe in my capability to teach the subject as I am native Thai speaker and a fast learner who is willing to learn, listen and develop myself to reach school expectation. I always put my passion to what I am doing with an eager to learn the new things and try my best to accomplish it as part of my success whether it is a small or big thing.

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