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There are 2 creatures in my house. First creature  her name is meow. I kept it from neighborhood. Second creature her name is batty. I got from my aunt. I have fed them for 4 years. Both of them have different habit completely. However, there is only thing that they is same. they are cats...

Breed
Meow was a stray cat. The first time, I found it at roadside. It was a kitten which is small, gaunt and lonely. I was scared that it would be hit by a car. Thus I kept it. In Contrast, Batty is a persian. It was fed by my aunt before she is allergic to fur cat. Therefore She brought Batty to me. Meow is a orange fur cat is different from Batty is a white. Meow is thinner and its fur is shorter than Batty.

Meow is a friendly cat. It love everyone who play with it. It like to run around My house. When I called it, it ran rapidly toward me.It always nuzzle to me. In contrast, Batty spend a lot of time  sleeping. She doesn't like to people touch her. she is quite arrogant. Although they have  different cheracters, they get along well.

Moreover, their voices have identity.  Meow's voice is clearer and sweeter than  batty. I usually hear its voice when it want to play with me. In contrats, Batty is pretty quiet. It call me when It was hungry. Some day I hear batty cry out loundly like she never ever cry before. As my mom put one foot on its tail.

They and I have spend a lot of time living together for many years. I have seen difference of them. Though they have different habit completely, they have never quarreled each other. In my eyes, it was a destiny that we met.They have got me head over heels.

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