สวัสดีค่ะ รบกวนช่วยดูจดหมาย letter of motivation ที่จะยื่นวีซ่าไปเรียนภาษา 5 เดือน ที่เยอรมนีหน่อยค่ะ ว่าใช้ได้ไหม เยิ่นเย้อไปไหม ควรปรับแก้ตรงไหนและสมเหตุสมผลไหมคะ ขอบคุณค่ะ
My name is ***. I am *** years old. I graduated high school from *** United States of America in June 2018. I have applied and attended *** in Paris, France for Interior Architecture & Design from September 2018 to January 2019.
I have been to Germany and traveling to Munich and Frankfurt in January 2017, during the time I was in France between 2018 and 2019, I also have been to Frankfurt and Mainz. I am always interested in Germany ever since I took a trip there for the first time. In my opinion, I think Germany has fascinating history to learn endlessly. Not only engrossing landmarks but also art museums and beautiful architecture.
I have been interested in studying German language according to my family business that is about interior and furniture design which ourmain customers are from the European market, we have to make the business contact with foreign clients quite often, with more than 100 million native speakers, German is the most widely-spoken first language in Europe, and hence the German language is becoming increasingly important in the global market, from my point of view, I do not believe that only English language will be enough if we want to go farther in business.
Other than that, I am planning to apply for Bachelor Degree in Faculty of Art and Design: Produkt design, Bauhaus-Universität Weimar which I believe that the subjects they have in the university would be useful for my family business, and especially when Bauhaus is famous for industrial design, but I have to accomplish the German TestDAF TDN3 and have to be able to communicate with other people in German before that. From my experience, studying a language in a country where it is widely spoken obviously has more advantages in many ways.
I have taken German language course every weekend during the time in high school *** in Bangkok, Thailand for around four months in 2017, after that I have an opportunity to go to United States of America for one academic year and spent some times in Paris, France, during the time, I did not have much chance to continue learning German language.
I would like to express my interest taking part in
***, located in *** Frankfurt, Germany not only for continue pursue intention in learning language, gain experiences, but also explore more about the country by sightseeing and visit different places and landmarks in Germany. My plan is to take Language course from German level A2 to C1 from May 2019 to October 2019 and I am willing to go back to my home country after I finish the language course.
จขกท. จะมีใบ certicate A1 แนบไปค่ะ เคยได้วีซ่าเชงเก้นท่องเที่ยว, J-1 อเมริกา, Type D ฝรั่งเศส มีประวัติท่องเที่ยวหลายประเทศ จะมีโอกาสผ่านวีซ่าไหมคะ และเป็นไปได้ไหมถ้าจะเปลี่ยนเมืองขอไปเมือง Mainz แทนแล้วจะได้วีซ่าง่ายขึ้นกว่าไปเมืองใหญ่ ขอบคุณอีกครั้งค่ะ
รบกวนช่วยดู letter of motivation ยื่นขอวีซ่าเรียนภาษาเยอรมันหน่อยค่ะ
My name is ***. I am *** years old. I graduated high school from *** United States of America in June 2018. I have applied and attended *** in Paris, France for Interior Architecture & Design from September 2018 to January 2019.
I have been to Germany and traveling to Munich and Frankfurt in January 2017, during the time I was in France between 2018 and 2019, I also have been to Frankfurt and Mainz. I am always interested in Germany ever since I took a trip there for the first time. In my opinion, I think Germany has fascinating history to learn endlessly. Not only engrossing landmarks but also art museums and beautiful architecture.
I have been interested in studying German language according to my family business that is about interior and furniture design which ourmain customers are from the European market, we have to make the business contact with foreign clients quite often, with more than 100 million native speakers, German is the most widely-spoken first language in Europe, and hence the German language is becoming increasingly important in the global market, from my point of view, I do not believe that only English language will be enough if we want to go farther in business.
Other than that, I am planning to apply for Bachelor Degree in Faculty of Art and Design: Produkt design, Bauhaus-Universität Weimar which I believe that the subjects they have in the university would be useful for my family business, and especially when Bauhaus is famous for industrial design, but I have to accomplish the German TestDAF TDN3 and have to be able to communicate with other people in German before that. From my experience, studying a language in a country where it is widely spoken obviously has more advantages in many ways.
I have taken German language course every weekend during the time in high school *** in Bangkok, Thailand for around four months in 2017, after that I have an opportunity to go to United States of America for one academic year and spent some times in Paris, France, during the time, I did not have much chance to continue learning German language.
I would like to express my interest taking part in ***, located in *** Frankfurt, Germany not only for continue pursue intention in learning language, gain experiences, but also explore more about the country by sightseeing and visit different places and landmarks in Germany. My plan is to take Language course from German level A2 to C1 from May 2019 to October 2019 and I am willing to go back to my home country after I finish the language course.
จขกท. จะมีใบ certicate A1 แนบไปค่ะ เคยได้วีซ่าเชงเก้นท่องเที่ยว, J-1 อเมริกา, Type D ฝรั่งเศส มีประวัติท่องเที่ยวหลายประเทศ จะมีโอกาสผ่านวีซ่าไหมคะ และเป็นไปได้ไหมถ้าจะเปลี่ยนเมืองขอไปเมือง Mainz แทนแล้วจะได้วีซ่าง่ายขึ้นกว่าไปเมืองใหญ่ ขอบคุณอีกครั้งค่ะ