ฝึกเขียนessay รบกวนช่วยตรวจประโยคและแกรมม่าให้ทีค่ะ

Maybe you can imagine the country you want to go to.Or the place you've been to. You have fun with many things that you have done. But actually, the adventure may be near you from the beginning.My hometown is the first place where I started my adventure around the house.

To wake up in the early morning makes me more time.Because my grandparent always woke up early to go to netting a fish, and I'm excited to follow my grandparent every morning. I usually ran with a few dogs. Went to the big tree around the canal to wait for them to finish netting . I spent the time walking around the canal. When they finished. I like to sit beside my grandma to see her took them out from the net. And what I like the best is that I will choose the strongest fish to let into the fish pond in backyard

The best energy is delicious food. The person who is good at cooking is my grandma. Ingredient can be found around the house such as chili, basil, lime, fish, everything is so fresh. Sometimes I like to be around her to see how she cooked and helped her a bit. However, I like to wait for tasting a food more, when she cooks finished, the aroma of food made everyone in the house want to eat it all. The moment that everyone will come to eat together makes my heart feel warm.


The one I love and the one who loves me living here. When I was a child, I waited for a school holidays for going to my hometown. Every time I come back here, I feel everyone cares about me. It might be because I was a kid.
Sometimes they made a toy from coconut shells. Sometimes they took me to play and swim around the river. Everywhere I went to play makes me fun and free. Also, I like when I slept in a hammock and talked with everyone. Everything they gave me makes me love this place a lot.

Then, I found a true happiness from far away. However, I always ready to go there. They always welcome me. I can feel their love. When I need to come back to my home, I will miss Grandma's food. Some fun stories can't find in Bangkok. Also, my hometown It's like the perfect place I've ever known.

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