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โจทย์เป็นเรื่องcultureค่ะ
paragraph 1 : What have you learned about culture in this course?
paragraph 2 : How will the information from this class change how you interact with foreigners?
paragraph 3 : How have you (or someone you know) experienced prejudice or racism? What can be done to prevent the kind of prejudice or racism you experienced?
I have learned about culture that is interesting for me. This course makes me understand difference about cultures; for example, Eastern people may express their emotions in a subtle way; on the other hand, Western people may express their emotions openly and directly. Furthermore, Eastern people give more priority to the family and elders; Nonetheless, Western people give preference to the individual. I think it is important whether you know how the difference is. You can adjust yourself if you live in unfamiliar country. Another interesting culture is the festival because it makes me know about difference of living that I never know before. I have presented and searched about Mardi Gras festival, so I understand important history; for example, Mardi Gras is a Christian holiday and popular cultural phenomenon that dates back thousands of years to pagan spring and fertility rites. Also known as carnival, it is celebrated in many countries around the world. Moreover, I am interested in huge parades that are outstanding and dresses that consist of three colors such as purple, gold, and green. It is very beautiful festival.
After knowing information from this class, I change interaction with foreigner; for example, I know that the Westerners place high importance on time efficiency and punctuality, unlike Easterners, time is a lot more flexible for them. So I will be on time and not be late. I should realize about time how important is. Another interaction is to understand background and avoid being about sensitive issues; for example, racism makes people hate. Someone may think these issues are the fun thing, but it hurts feeling of people and is hard to delete unforgettable deeply hurt from their mind. Studying in this course makes me realize that we should not ignore sensitive issues. We should understand difference of humanity and respect them. I feel glad to know that many people run a racist campaign; however, I want Thai people realize violence of racist increasingly because they may think it is usual for them. They always talk about inferiority complex such as color skin, shape, and appearance. Being aware of sensitive topics can help you to avoid using words that might offend or upset people.
I have experienced prejudice because my appearance looks like a child. People always think I cannot do anything. Sometimes, someone thinks I am stupid and annoying, so I feel uncomfortable. In their eyes, I always do anything wrong. I feel like I am a comedian even if I am just a funny person. They don’t care about me because they think I am not overthinking. Moreover, I have been bullied in school because I have shouted out that I do not want to be bullied. I want them to know that I am angry and displeased, but they think it is a funny story and want to bully me again. I have no right to say how I feel. After that, I have been in the marching band. Everyone has said I cannot be that. At the beginning, I want to give up because anyone has said I don’t have ability to play music, and music have been out of tune; however, two reasons why I am in the marching band are because I love music and I want to do what I have dreamed. I have tried everything that has made me improve myself. I want to delete these words that I cannot do anything. Even if I looks like a child, it does not mean I am an incapacitated person. After all, I can play music and everyone has accepted my ability. I feel really happy that I can prove them wrong and they have never said that again.
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ปล. หนูไม่ค่อยแน่ใจเรื่องเท้นซ์ค่ะ คือจะเล่าเหตุการณ์ในอดีตช่วงนึง แต่ก็จะใช้ past tense ไปเลยก็กลัวจะแปลกๆ อะค่ะ ก็เลยใช้ perfect tense ไปบ้างค่ะ ช่วงนี้อาจจะเขียนไม่ค่อยลื่นไหลเท่าไหร่ เพราะว่างานเดดไลน์ค่อนข้างเร็วค่ะ อย่างไรก็ตาม ขอบคุณที่ช่วยชี้แนะแนวทางการเขียนนะคะ เพราะถ้าหากหนูได้รับคำติชม หนูก็อาจจะสามารถพัฒนางานเขียนได้มากขึ้น และแก้ไขได้ดีกว่านี้ค่ะ
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โจทย์เป็นเรื่องcultureค่ะ
paragraph 1 : What have you learned about culture in this course?
paragraph 2 : How will the information from this class change how you interact with foreigners?
paragraph 3 : How have you (or someone you know) experienced prejudice or racism? What can be done to prevent the kind of prejudice or racism you experienced?
I have learned about culture that is interesting for me. This course makes me understand difference about cultures; for example, Eastern people may express their emotions in a subtle way; on the other hand, Western people may express their emotions openly and directly. Furthermore, Eastern people give more priority to the family and elders; Nonetheless, Western people give preference to the individual. I think it is important whether you know how the difference is. You can adjust yourself if you live in unfamiliar country. Another interesting culture is the festival because it makes me know about difference of living that I never know before. I have presented and searched about Mardi Gras festival, so I understand important history; for example, Mardi Gras is a Christian holiday and popular cultural phenomenon that dates back thousands of years to pagan spring and fertility rites. Also known as carnival, it is celebrated in many countries around the world. Moreover, I am interested in huge parades that are outstanding and dresses that consist of three colors such as purple, gold, and green. It is very beautiful festival.
After knowing information from this class, I change interaction with foreigner; for example, I know that the Westerners place high importance on time efficiency and punctuality, unlike Easterners, time is a lot more flexible for them. So I will be on time and not be late. I should realize about time how important is. Another interaction is to understand background and avoid being about sensitive issues; for example, racism makes people hate. Someone may think these issues are the fun thing, but it hurts feeling of people and is hard to delete unforgettable deeply hurt from their mind. Studying in this course makes me realize that we should not ignore sensitive issues. We should understand difference of humanity and respect them. I feel glad to know that many people run a racist campaign; however, I want Thai people realize violence of racist increasingly because they may think it is usual for them. They always talk about inferiority complex such as color skin, shape, and appearance. Being aware of sensitive topics can help you to avoid using words that might offend or upset people.
I have experienced prejudice because my appearance looks like a child. People always think I cannot do anything. Sometimes, someone thinks I am stupid and annoying, so I feel uncomfortable. In their eyes, I always do anything wrong. I feel like I am a comedian even if I am just a funny person. They don’t care about me because they think I am not overthinking. Moreover, I have been bullied in school because I have shouted out that I do not want to be bullied. I want them to know that I am angry and displeased, but they think it is a funny story and want to bully me again. I have no right to say how I feel. After that, I have been in the marching band. Everyone has said I cannot be that. At the beginning, I want to give up because anyone has said I don’t have ability to play music, and music have been out of tune; however, two reasons why I am in the marching band are because I love music and I want to do what I have dreamed. I have tried everything that has made me improve myself. I want to delete these words that I cannot do anything. Even if I looks like a child, it does not mean I am an incapacitated person. After all, I can play music and everyone has accepted my ability. I feel really happy that I can prove them wrong and they have never said that again.
ขอโทษที่แกรมมาร์ไม่ค่อยโอเคนะคะ หนูจะพยายามปรับปรุงแก้ไขค่ะ
ปล. หนูไม่ค่อยแน่ใจเรื่องเท้นซ์ค่ะ คือจะเล่าเหตุการณ์ในอดีตช่วงนึง แต่ก็จะใช้ past tense ไปเลยก็กลัวจะแปลกๆ อะค่ะ ก็เลยใช้ perfect tense ไปบ้างค่ะ ช่วงนี้อาจจะเขียนไม่ค่อยลื่นไหลเท่าไหร่ เพราะว่างานเดดไลน์ค่อนข้างเร็วค่ะ อย่างไรก็ตาม ขอบคุณที่ช่วยชี้แนะแนวทางการเขียนนะคะ เพราะถ้าหากหนูได้รับคำติชม หนูก็อาจจะสามารถพัฒนางานเขียนได้มากขึ้น และแก้ไขได้ดีกว่านี้ค่ะ