Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reason and example to support your position.

    In the world of highly competitive businesses, new firms are emerging in every single corner of the world. Most these firms only focus on profit strategies which are ways how to increase their benefits. These kinds of conducting businesses can bring about selfish businesses centered on their own interests and disregarded for surrounding communities. This causes adverse impacts on people, environment and society. I, therefore, disagree with the idea that businesses should accentuated profits for the following three main reasons.
First of all, profit centered businesses will do anything they can to boost sales. They may entrap prospective customers with propaganda not frankly provided facts of their goods for customers so that they can sell nearly expired or low quality products to unlucky victims. For example, last month I saw an enticing billboard showed discount workout clothes. This attracted the passers-by, including me to go shopping for them. However, I could detect some flaws on these cloths; therefore, I did not waste money on these low quality products anymore.
In addition to increase sales, in order to gain more returns, companies have to cut manufacturing costs by using cheap raw materials, emitting noxious gases into the air, and discharging toxic chemicals into the river. For instance, the newspaper, Bangkok Post, reported yesterday that to reduce costs of productivity, a metal manufacturing plant did not install wastewater treatment systems to eliminate contaminants from wastewater. Disregarding for adverse environmental impacts, the factory has discharged contaminated water into the river; as a result, a number of aquatic animals die from absorbing toxic substances into their body.
Moreover, to raise profit, companies have to reduce expenses. Business firms may violate the tax law by evading taxes or pay less taxes to the government. As a result, the government earns less annual budget to spend on improving education system, building more communication infrastructures and raising the population’s living standard. According to adverse impacts on tax avoidance of businesses, to illustrate, the government may down financial aid for students. Fewer and fewer students are able to educate themselves beyond high school. Consequently, the nation will waste the intelligence, imagination, and energy of a large segment of the present college-age generation.
In summary, with underlying only earnings, companies may conduct crook businesses in order to boost their profits. They will increase sales by propaganda, cut costs by applying low standard materials or polluting environment and reduce expenses by adopting tax evasion measures. If this trend continues, we will face serious economic and social problems in the foreseeable future. We need to find a balance between business conduct and social responsibility. By so doing, we can enjoy the best of both worlds.

                                    
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