Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job that to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there are many people in the world and each one has own view about the job and income. However, people can classify into two categories, the first category has its philosophy “work for happiness”. Moreover, the second one’s method is work for wealthy. So, we have to consider whether the first type or the second type is the better path to walk.

In this paragraph we are going to discuss about the first group. We have to ask ourselves whether the money is component of our happiness or it is not. People who classified to this category did not work for income, there priority is there happiness. Moreover, many who have enjoy there job are success. To illustrate, Steve Jobs, the founder of Apple, he said that he love mechanic and IT. So, he establish his own IT company under the brand Apple. Consequently, he become very successful man in the IT world.

On the other hand, there are some people think money is the first goal of them to work. Despite the job that they got is really boring, they have to do it, with no choice, for wealthiness. Today, money is very important for our life, causing us to use it for our convenience. For example, Josh is starving since he did not buy any food for three days.

In conclusion, money is the necessary component for us to do what we want. If we are wealthy, we do not need to anxious about our finance. In my opinion, money is priority for our life. We should do apply any job that is acceptable first. Then when we have enough money we can do anything we desire. Someone who get a job which they love is the lucky one.

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