ช่วยให้คะเเนนIELTS Writing Task2 อันนี้หน่อยครับ

In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourage the young from taking part in any sport themselves.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, it have been realized that television programmes are a part of our life. As a result, sports programmes are one of them which is our shadow. To discuss and judge that they are good or not with no reason might be a prejudice. So, we have to think of pros and cons.

Sports programme can make people want to taking part in playing sport which fond of them. Moreover, it give us an opportunity to watch our idol playing sport on the television. Result of that, it can make people start play any sport same as their idol. When the programme is broadcasting make people want to play sport, causing them a good health and make them fit for work. It has some tale about TV programme, Danny Welbeck have watched his idol playing football during a sports programme. Now, he is professional footballer.

By contrast, it can make juvenile avoid themselves from playing sport because they can enjoy it by just watching. Moreover, they go to gambling sports result such as betting football or tennis. Despite they get money now, they will lost it someday.

In conclusion, sports programme  is good but if we use it wrong way. It could lead us to the wrong way such as to gamble. In my opinion, firstly, You have to ask yourself what way you enjoy a sport, spectator or player, then you have to choose your own way. If you choose to play it, you will be a picture of health. Secondly we have to play it instead of bet it. As a result, we will have good community and good health.
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