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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.
For most people, believe that school teacher is very important for children because they give children knowledge. However, I am convinced that parents are the most significant teacher of child’s life for many reasons.
Firstly, parents know us very much. They spend a large amount of time with us since we born. So they know our merit and demerit in details. Meanwhile, they help us to get rid of our demerit. For instance, when I was ten-year-old. I had a fight with neighborhood friends. It was my fault but I did not admit it. My parents gently taught me that if it was my fault just admit it and keep that as a lesson. Then I could improve myself and be a better person.
Secondly, parents possessed many experiences. Since they are older than us, they have experienced many things. It is good for us to have a role model and can get advises from them when we have got problems. My own experience is a compelling of this. When I was in senior year of high school, I have to choose faculty to study in the university that is a huge decision because it will affect the job in the future. They help me a lot. They told me that choose what you love to do whatever you want. You will do your best in anything you choose. As a result of these advises, I choose to study in pharmacy faculty. Now I enjoy a successful career as a pharmacist. For this reason, I strongly believe that parents are the best teacher.
Furthermore, although child gets much knowledge from the teacher, basic skills in our whole life are from our parents. They are the persons who love us the most They will teach us everything without reservations. For example, I learned knitting, cooking, and cleaning from my mother, while learn fixing leaky faucet from my father. I can do everything by myself when I had to stay in the dormitory. Because of these basic skill parents taught me, It follows me for whole life.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that is no better teacher than the parents.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.
For most people, believe that school teacher is very important for children because they give children knowledge. However, I am convinced that parents are the most significant teacher of child’s life for many reasons.
Firstly, parents know us very much. They spend a large amount of time with us since we born. So they know our merit and demerit in details. Meanwhile, they help us to get rid of our demerit. For instance, when I was ten-year-old. I had a fight with neighborhood friends. It was my fault but I did not admit it. My parents gently taught me that if it was my fault just admit it and keep that as a lesson. Then I could improve myself and be a better person.
Secondly, parents possessed many experiences. Since they are older than us, they have experienced many things. It is good for us to have a role model and can get advises from them when we have got problems. My own experience is a compelling of this. When I was in senior year of high school, I have to choose faculty to study in the university that is a huge decision because it will affect the job in the future. They help me a lot. They told me that choose what you love to do whatever you want. You will do your best in anything you choose. As a result of these advises, I choose to study in pharmacy faculty. Now I enjoy a successful career as a pharmacist. For this reason, I strongly believe that parents are the best teacher.
Furthermore, although child gets much knowledge from the teacher, basic skills in our whole life are from our parents. They are the persons who love us the most They will teach us everything without reservations. For example, I learned knitting, cooking, and cleaning from my mother, while learn fixing leaky faucet from my father. I can do everything by myself when I had to stay in the dormitory. Because of these basic skill parents taught me, It follows me for whole life.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that is no better teacher than the parents.
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