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NAME - SURNAME  xxxx xxxx
Personal Details  
Date of birth: xx July xxxx
Nationality: Thai
Race: Thai
Religion: Buddhism
Marital status: Single
Graduated Graduated computer graphics at xxxx Technology College and now studying at xxxxxx university , I choose to study xxxxxx University Of course my first choice was because the xxxxxx University was beautiful and Great teaching tool.
Personal Habit I find it hard to meet people because I'm a little talker and shy.
my shyness has ruined so many good opportunities . I'm Impatient and Easily Irritated Which is not good for me.

My good Habit
If you know me I will be funny, crazy I may be a bad person. But if you know me you will change the mind.
My bad habit
I am a forgetful person , irascible and maybe Some negative thoughts.
My ability
I can take pictures of people who are not beautiful i can change is beautiful with the program.
Actually  I'm not a professional I'm just an amateur but I can do a little
I like to take pictures because Taking pictures helps you to hang on to those memories a little longer. Hardly anyone makes photo albums anymore but remember how you felt and how your smile spread across your face when you would hold those prints in your hand? We’re looking at pictures on our screens more than ever but the feeling of wanting to hold on to memories is still the same.
Please let me show my shooting skills in thailand got talent
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