เนื้อเรื่องประมาณว่า เพื่อนๆทำงานต่างที่กันแล้วจะนัดกันไปเที่ยว
อยากให้ช่วยตรวจดูว่าแกรมม่าพอได้หรือเปล่า คำตรงไหนที่เปลี่ยนได้ คือเราไม่เก่งภาษาอังกฤษ อยากให้ช่วยดูให้หน่อยนะคะ
At cafe (Fern see Timehop on FB 2 years ago ,she want to meet her friends again)
ON MESSENGER FROM FB
Fern: Heyyyyyy my friends
Jam: What’s up?
Fern: I miss youuuuuuu.
Eve: I miss you too.
Noey: (send stickers)
Fern: Heyyy I want to travel somewhere with you guys.
Eve & Noey : Yeaaa I like that idea.
Jam: I agree with you ,Now I’m busy Can we talk again after I finish my work in 3 hrs ?
Eve&Noey&Fern : Yessss !!! (send sticker)
Start Video call
Fern: Hi !!! I want to meet youuuu.
Eve: Hello !! I miss you so much. How is life ?
Noey: Everything is going all right.
Jam: Awww Now i’m working a lot. Can we go there in long weekend in Dec. ?
Eve: Where are we going?
Jam: I want to go to the beach
Noey: I want to go to mountain
Fern: Heyyyyy At Koh Phangan have Countdown Party in 31 Dec.(Thailand)
Eve: That’s a great idea.
Noey: Really? It’s okay When to go ?
Jam: I have free time in 28 Dec. till 6 Jan.
Eve: Okay I think Can we go there in 30 Dec. till 4 Jan? Does anyone agree?
Fern: I’m free No problem.
Noey: I done with my work too. So No problem.
Jam: How will we go there?
Fern: We will flying to Suratthani by plane then go to Koh Phangan by ferry boat.
Eve: Okay
Noey: Okay friends I will handle everything about booking flight so don’t worry.
Eve&Jam&Fern : Okay
Fern: Okay Noey handle booking flight and I will book room
Eve : How much will it cost.?
Noey : A round- trip ticket , it is 2500 THB.
Fern : This trip pay 10000 THB.
Eve : Ahhhhh
Jam: Hey , I want to go to snorkeling.
Noey : I agree . Excellent!
Eve : After party , we will go to snorkeling at Koh PP.
Fern : Let me summarise.
1st day: we will travel Suratthani city.
2nd – 3rd: Countdown party
4th- 5th : snorkeling at Koh PP.
Noey: My friend , we have a got flight in 30 Dec and the flight time is 10:00 AM.
Jam: Don Muang Airport or Suvannabhumi Airport ?
Noey: Don Muang Airport.
Eve : Iam excited and glad to meet you “ I love you my friends”
Fern&Eve&Jam&Noey : Bye.
ช่วยดูการแต่งเนื้อเรื่องภาษาอังกฤษหน่อยคะ ^^
อยากให้ช่วยตรวจดูว่าแกรมม่าพอได้หรือเปล่า คำตรงไหนที่เปลี่ยนได้ คือเราไม่เก่งภาษาอังกฤษ อยากให้ช่วยดูให้หน่อยนะคะ
At cafe (Fern see Timehop on FB 2 years ago ,she want to meet her friends again)
ON MESSENGER FROM FB
Fern: Heyyyyyy my friends
Jam: What’s up?
Fern: I miss youuuuuuu.
Eve: I miss you too.
Noey: (send stickers)
Fern: Heyyy I want to travel somewhere with you guys.
Eve & Noey : Yeaaa I like that idea.
Jam: I agree with you ,Now I’m busy Can we talk again after I finish my work in 3 hrs ?
Eve&Noey&Fern : Yessss !!! (send sticker)
Start Video call
Fern: Hi !!! I want to meet youuuu.
Eve: Hello !! I miss you so much. How is life ?
Noey: Everything is going all right.
Jam: Awww Now i’m working a lot. Can we go there in long weekend in Dec. ?
Eve: Where are we going?
Jam: I want to go to the beach
Noey: I want to go to mountain
Fern: Heyyyyy At Koh Phangan have Countdown Party in 31 Dec.(Thailand)
Eve: That’s a great idea.
Noey: Really? It’s okay When to go ?
Jam: I have free time in 28 Dec. till 6 Jan.
Eve: Okay I think Can we go there in 30 Dec. till 4 Jan? Does anyone agree?
Fern: I’m free No problem.
Noey: I done with my work too. So No problem.
Jam: How will we go there?
Fern: We will flying to Suratthani by plane then go to Koh Phangan by ferry boat.
Eve: Okay
Noey: Okay friends I will handle everything about booking flight so don’t worry.
Eve&Jam&Fern : Okay
Fern: Okay Noey handle booking flight and I will book room
Eve : How much will it cost.?
Noey : A round- trip ticket , it is 2500 THB.
Fern : This trip pay 10000 THB.
Eve : Ahhhhh
Jam: Hey , I want to go to snorkeling.
Noey : I agree . Excellent!
Eve : After party , we will go to snorkeling at Koh PP.
Fern : Let me summarise.
1st day: we will travel Suratthani city.
2nd – 3rd: Countdown party
4th- 5th : snorkeling at Koh PP.
Noey: My friend , we have a got flight in 30 Dec and the flight time is 10:00 AM.
Jam: Don Muang Airport or Suvannabhumi Airport ?
Noey: Don Muang Airport.
Eve : Iam excited and glad to meet you “ I love you my friends”
Fern&Eve&Jam&Noey : Bye.