สวัสดีครับนี้เป็นงานเขียนอีกชิ้นหนึ่งนะครับ ที่อยากให้พี่ๆในห้องพันทิบช่วยติ แก้ แนะนำ หน่อยนะครับ พอดีวันเสาร์นี้ผมมีสอบ writing ( ผมเรียน มสธ เอกอังกฤษ ครับผม) เลยอยากลองฝึกมือหน่อย ก่อนเข้าสนามจริง( หรือ "ห้องเชือด" ) หัวข้อที่ผมนำมาเขียน ผมคิดขึ้นมาเองนะครับจากความสนใจส่วนตัว แน่นอนว่างานเขียนชิ้นนี้เป็นแนว Academic writing มันออกมาเป็นยังไง มีตรงไหนต้องแก้ก็อย่าลืมบอกผมด้วยนะครับ ขอบคุณครับ
ปล. มีใครเรียนเอกอังกฤษที่ มสธ ที่สอบวิชา "หลักการแปล" รหัสวิชา 14318 บ้างแล้วครับ คือผมสงสัยว่าในการสอบรู้สึกเป็นข้อกา 50 ข้อ ข้อเขียน (ให้แปลบทความ) อีก 2 ข้อ ผมสงสัยว่า "เขาอนุญาตให้นำพจนานุกรม Eng-Thai หรือ Eng-Eng เข้าไปได้หรือเปล่าครับ"?
Mae Hong Son VS. Bangkok: Spending Your Holidays
Even though Bangkok is the capital city of Thailand, Mae Hong Son is more suitable for being a tourist attraction with respect to environment, places, and the people and their life-styles. To begin with, Bangkok is now in quandary about environmental problems, especially air and noise pollution. To illustrate, Bangkok has such terrible traffic congestion that not only Bangkokians but also backpackers have to commute or travel in a shroud of exhaust fumes 24/7. Another instance is the number of buildings is now put up; the erection is responsible for noise pollution. Unlike Bangkok, Mae Hong Son, one of well-known northern provinces in Thailand, is known for dense forest, and for the villages that are shrouded in mist. Additionally, Mae Hong Son is a province with fresh air in the morning. The people do not have to struck in a traffic jam for hours as well. Apart from environment, if you travel around Mae Hong Son, you will feel you have been transported to another world- natural world. As mentioned above, Bangkok is a city full of skyscrapers, whereas the other is a province abundant in natural resources, not to mention a large number of beauty-spots and unseen places-- the places you will never find them in Bangkok. Mae Hong Son Loop, for example, is the route which you can take in all the sightseeing highlights of the province by following the amazing road. you can charter a motorbike and while away your holidays riding a motorcycle through mountain path and countryside. Another illustration is you can visit the Fish Cave; the flabbergasting cave where several kinds of fresh-water fish are living in. In addition to the environment and the places, the people and their life-styles of the two provinces are different. Compared with the denizens of Mae Hong Son, Bangkok dwellers always seem in a hurry. Not only are the people in the incessant hurry, but also the escalators at the train stations! They always hurry somewhere from somewhere else: They hurry home after school; they hurry school after breakfast-- in other words, Bangkok is a city full of people rushing in around the clock, whereas there is no hurry in Mae Hong Son. Another instance is the vendors of the two provinces are different too. In contrast to Mae Hong Son peddlers, Bangkok hawkers may wear anything they should do, e.g., clothes, aprons, white hats, etc, bar the only one thing they don't wear it-- smile. These are reasons why you should prefer to spend your holidays in Mae Hong Son instead of Bangkok.
Mae Hong Son VS Bangkok: Spend your holidays
ปล. มีใครเรียนเอกอังกฤษที่ มสธ ที่สอบวิชา "หลักการแปล" รหัสวิชา 14318 บ้างแล้วครับ คือผมสงสัยว่าในการสอบรู้สึกเป็นข้อกา 50 ข้อ ข้อเขียน (ให้แปลบทความ) อีก 2 ข้อ ผมสงสัยว่า "เขาอนุญาตให้นำพจนานุกรม Eng-Thai หรือ Eng-Eng เข้าไปได้หรือเปล่าครับ"?
Even though Bangkok is the capital city of Thailand, Mae Hong Son is more suitable for being a tourist attraction with respect to environment, places, and the people and their life-styles. To begin with, Bangkok is now in quandary about environmental problems, especially air and noise pollution. To illustrate, Bangkok has such terrible traffic congestion that not only Bangkokians but also backpackers have to commute or travel in a shroud of exhaust fumes 24/7. Another instance is the number of buildings is now put up; the erection is responsible for noise pollution. Unlike Bangkok, Mae Hong Son, one of well-known northern provinces in Thailand, is known for dense forest, and for the villages that are shrouded in mist. Additionally, Mae Hong Son is a province with fresh air in the morning. The people do not have to struck in a traffic jam for hours as well. Apart from environment, if you travel around Mae Hong Son, you will feel you have been transported to another world- natural world. As mentioned above, Bangkok is a city full of skyscrapers, whereas the other is a province abundant in natural resources, not to mention a large number of beauty-spots and unseen places-- the places you will never find them in Bangkok. Mae Hong Son Loop, for example, is the route which you can take in all the sightseeing highlights of the province by following the amazing road. you can charter a motorbike and while away your holidays riding a motorcycle through mountain path and countryside. Another illustration is you can visit the Fish Cave; the flabbergasting cave where several kinds of fresh-water fish are living in. In addition to the environment and the places, the people and their life-styles of the two provinces are different. Compared with the denizens of Mae Hong Son, Bangkok dwellers always seem in a hurry. Not only are the people in the incessant hurry, but also the escalators at the train stations! They always hurry somewhere from somewhere else: They hurry home after school; they hurry school after breakfast-- in other words, Bangkok is a city full of people rushing in around the clock, whereas there is no hurry in Mae Hong Son. Another instance is the vendors of the two provinces are different too. In contrast to Mae Hong Son peddlers, Bangkok hawkers may wear anything they should do, e.g., clothes, aprons, white hats, etc, bar the only one thing they don't wear it-- smile. These are reasons why you should prefer to spend your holidays in Mae Hong Son instead of Bangkok.