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[Spoil] คลิกเพื่อดูข้อความที่ซ่อนไว้Good morning teacher and everyone. our group has been chosing brazil that is the most hardest country to live. As you know Brazil have a lot of good thing and bad thing also but today, I’d like to explain about why brazil is hard to live
So, let’s start with the Criminal problems
1. Brazil is top 18 of the most countries that have a lot of murder rates in the world
( but they’re top 1 if count from the bodies.)
An example news about criminal
The mother-in-law of Formula 1 tycoon Bernie Ecclestone has reportedly been taken hostage for a £28 million ransom in what is believed to be Brazil’s biggest kidnapping.
The kidnappers were said to be in contact with the Ecclestone family and had demanded R$120 million (£27.84 million), to be paid in sterling in four separate bags. The details were confirmed by other publications, which had held off reporting the abduction.
Security services in São Paulo said they did not comment on kidnapping cases for the safety of the victim and could not confirm the reports. The Ecclestone family also declined to comment.
However, it was described as the biggest ever kidnapping ransom in the country amid heightened security concerns ahead of the Rio 2016 Olympics, which start in less than two weeks.
Now let’s move on to the Drug problems
Brazil have a lot of drug problems like cocain or cannabis.
2. Belém in Brazil
Belém is well-know as drugs deal area . it’s believed that drugs will transport pass through the Amazon forest that surround the Belem.
Drugs will send over the Brazil and the world.
Violence that happened in the Belem is virtually all about drugs.
By the way too many of cocain addict still live in here.
let see Another problems
3. Tradition in brazil. Even get married is a beautiful thing for woman but in some area of brazil they will get essay the tolerance by get bashed from the stranger a lot of woman died from this tradition.
4. Woodcutting in Amazon forest. Brazil has been dubbed as land of rain but in nowadays Sao Paulo it’s like a desert because of woodcutting that make it arid.
So That concludes my talk. If you have any questions, I’ll do my best to answer them.
Thank you for your attention.
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