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I would like to express my interest in securing the equity structured trading intern position, ……………., Stockholm, Sweden. I am a Master of ………………….. candidate at ……………. Prior to ……., I graduated with a bachelor’s degree in ............................ Chulalongkorn University, Thailand.
I can offer you my engineering problem-solving abilities and ambitions in quantitative discipline. I always take challenges as you will see in the attached resume which includes my study plan with focus on courses that require hard work and dedication. The courses developed my experience of implementation of both numerical and analytical skills. Especially for the numerical methods assignment, I implemented hybrid method to price plain vanilla option. And the work has given me how to model stochastic simulation with correlation as well as a practical knowledge of model calibration. My commitment to working in diverse environments, ranging from …(name of city)…….. to impoverished areas in Thailand, is a representative of my flexibility and adaptability. After working in many group compositions, I am very much confident. I have my self-esteem but not ego, so I always listen and will not argue on behalf of protecting myself, but on behalf of producing good works. And I can single out myself on the point that I can add diversity to ……(the company)……., becoming an asset of the team. I am willing to improve myself and listen to others’ opinion. I will deliver the team my open-minded and can-do attitude as well as my long-term ambitions to strive in team-oriented environment.
I have attached my resume for your review and would appreciate the chance regarding recruitment process via phone or skype interview.
Best Regards,
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I would like to express my interest in securing the equity structured trading intern position, ……………., Stockholm, Sweden. I am a Master of ………………….. candidate at ……………. Prior to ……., I graduated with a bachelor’s degree in ............................ Chulalongkorn University, Thailand.
I can offer you my engineering problem-solving abilities and ambitions in quantitative discipline. I always take challenges as you will see in the attached resume which includes my study plan with focus on courses that require hard work and dedication. The courses developed my experience of implementation of both numerical and analytical skills. Especially for the numerical methods assignment, I implemented hybrid method to price plain vanilla option. And the work has given me how to model stochastic simulation with correlation as well as a practical knowledge of model calibration. My commitment to working in diverse environments, ranging from …(name of city)…….. to impoverished areas in Thailand, is a representative of my flexibility and adaptability. After working in many group compositions, I am very much confident. I have my self-esteem but not ego, so I always listen and will not argue on behalf of protecting myself, but on behalf of producing good works. And I can single out myself on the point that I can add diversity to ……(the company)……., becoming an asset of the team. I am willing to improve myself and listen to others’ opinion. I will deliver the team my open-minded and can-do attitude as well as my long-term ambitions to strive in team-oriented environment.
I have attached my resume for your review and would appreciate the chance regarding recruitment process via phone or skype interview.
Best Regards,