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The university is more than a collection of buildings and classrooms, it is a culturally rich environment .The university is a society in which students, teachers and administrators work together, three of which are remarkable in university life ; making friendship, living on the campus and doing extra –curricula activities.
    University life is a new start for a lot of things to learn and learn to live life another side. Which is all the time,independent and to leave a comment. That is a major opportunity to prepare to enter the working age in the future, which makes the students must learn to adapt to cope with life in the new format, which is different from studying in the school.
    
    When we start life in the University, we will try to open mind to new things and we must enter into the University activity is when the University has actively participated in the experience to live together in society with other people and to recognize select friendship. We must control the unruly, not myself, not to indulge, go with light colors. We will have to control yourself and recollect that Why we will study? - for family? for my parents? for myself?
Before long   , I will graduate school at 6. All my friends are split according to their different dreams.  Throughout the past 3 years, I've known the friends of science classrooms. All my friends help me everything and make all smiles and laughter. Therefore, I hope that in my university life will be happy, have fun and meet a good friend again. So I will do my best  in my university life.

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