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Chapter 1
In the kitchen have little cute three mice and have three colors.
The blue one named “Mercy”.
The green one named “Jacky” and
The pink one named “Lucy”.

Chapter 2
Mercy is elder than others which he is a big one.
They always eating some food in the kitchen
Mercy likes cheese, Jacky likes candy and Lucy likes vegetables.

Chapter 3
One day three mice are enjoy eating their favorite food.
Jacky and Lucy are interested nothing, but Mercy heard footsteps are coming close.
Mercy : Do you hear footsteps are coming, Jacky and  Lucy?
Jacky : Nothing.
Lucy : Look at that! Jessy ,a cat is coming.
Mercy : Go back to our________.  Hurry up! Hurry up!

Chapter 4
Three mice were exhausted.
They run into their____________  in time.
They find the way to let them know when Jessy is coming
Lucy : let someone keeps an eyes on Jessy during we eating.
Jacky : That sound good! I agree with you, Lucy.
Mercy : I think “It not good enough. If we let someone keeps an eyes on Jessy, Someone will not eat. A bell is good, absolutely good.
If Jessy wear a bell when he come close us, we will hear a bell ring.

Chapter 5
Next day, three mice come out and find a bell. Jacky saw a bell in the table.
Lucy keeps an eyes on Jessy nearby the door. Mercy is trying to get the bell.

Chapter 6
Jacky : What we do next?
Mercy : We need someone to lure Jessy and then wearing him the bell.
Lucy : Oh! How we should do?
Mercy : We should draws the straws game. It is probably fair.




Chapter  7
Jessy saw Lucy and chasing her.
Lucy run as fast as she can and get into the___________, but Jessy hit the wall.
Suddenly Mercy and Jacky set the bell to Jessy’s neck.

Chapter 8
Mercy : We already done.
Lucy : I was excited and fear in the same time.
Jacky : From now on, We don’t be afraid Jessy.

Chapter 9
Three mice eating their favorite food as much as they can.

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Chapter 1
In the kitchen, there are three little cute mice in different colors.
The blue one is named “Mercy”.    ( ถูกตั้งชื่อว่า)
The green one is named “Jacky” and
The pink one is named “Lucy”.

Chapter 2
Mercy is bigger than others because he's the oldest mice in group.  
They always eat some food in the kitchen
Mercy likes cheese. Jacky likes candy. Lucy likes vegetables.

Chapter 3
One day three mice  enjoy eating their favorite food.
Jacky and Lucy are interested in nothing, but Mercy hears footsteps ( that are ) coming closely.
Mercy : Do you hear footsteps coming closely, don't you?
Jacky : Nothing.
Lucy : Look at that! Jessy ,a cat is coming.
Mercy : Go back to our________.  Hurry up! Hurry up!

Chapter 4
Three mice are exhausted.
They run into their____________  in time.
They find the way to let them know when Jessy is coming
Lucy : let someone keep an eyes on Jessy during we are eating.
Jacky : That sounds good! I agree with you, Lucy.
Mercy : I think “It is not good enough. If we let someone keep an eyes on Jessy, Someone will be not eatten. A bell is good, absolutely good.
If Jessy wears a bell when he comes closely us, we will hear a bell ring.

Chapter 5
Next day, three mice come out and find a bell. Jacky sees a bell in the table.
Lucy keeps an eyes on Jessy nearby the door. Mercy is trying to get the bell.

Chapter 6
Jacky : What will we do next?
Mercy : We need someone to lure Jessy and then wear him the bell.
Lucy : Oh! How should we do?
Mercy : We should draw the straws game. It is probably fair.




Chapter  7
Jessy sees Lucy and chases her.
Lucy runs as fast as she can and get into the___________, but Jessy hits the wall.
Suddenly Mercy and Jacky set the bell to Jessy’s neck.

Chapter 8
Mercy : We  already did.
Lucy : I was excited and fear in the same time.
Jacky : From now on, We don’t be afraid of Jessy.

Chapter 9
Three mice are eating their favorite food as much as they can.


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