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Andy Kollam crying for help inside an abandon house. Roger Hilly kept him inside and tied him up on the wall. Nobody heard him. Fifteen minutes later, Roger came back to him and punched him in the face and he said “You won’t be get out of here easily if you don’t give me back my father’s golden amulet.” And then Andy cried “How do you know I have it?!” He coughed with blood “I didn’t stole it, I swear to my father name.” The golden amulet was discovered by Lord Tomson Kollam and it belonged to his great grandfather. 10 years ago Lord Tomson sold it to Mr. Hilly for his stupidity and drunken. Because he ran out of cash to buy a drink. His son Andy found out that he sold a precious thing from his ancestry. They believed that the golden amulet has a power to create a parallel world. Roger who is live in a wealthy family and has a hi-end class in town. “You know how to use it, didn’t you?” said Roger. Andy felt his head spinning and cannot remember anything. He said “I don’t know what you mean, it just an ordinary amulet thing and I don’t have it.” He really good at lying. “I know you stole it from my house last night! Don’t you dare lie to me, son of a farmer!”
Mr. Hilly heard the noise and he peeked in to see what was happening inside. They were inside arguing. Then Mr. Hilly saw them with shocked and horridly ran to Andy, helping him untied. “What wrong with you Roger!” Roger sighed “I know him well that he stole our golden amulet from our house last night dad!” Mr. Hilly paused then said “That night we have a dinner together with Mr. Tomson and Andy and I didn’t see them or anyone goes upstairs.” Mr. Hilly pulled out of his pocket and reveal his golden amulet to show it to him. “See? It hasn’t been stolen from anyone.” Said Mr. Hilly with bashfulness and Andy stunned for a minute and he thought how would that be? It is two of them or just a copycat? "Hmm... Mr. Hilly can you don't tell my dad about this, please?" Said Andy. And Mr. Hilly nodded.
My short story 2 ~ Feel free to correct me ~
I want to try something new this time. And hope you enjoy my story.
Andy Kollam crying for help inside an abandon house. Roger Hilly kept him inside and tied him up on the wall. Nobody heard him. Fifteen minutes later, Roger came back to him and punched him in the face and he said “You won’t be get out of here easily if you don’t give me back my father’s golden amulet.” And then Andy cried “How do you know I have it?!” He coughed with blood “I didn’t stole it, I swear to my father name.” The golden amulet was discovered by Lord Tomson Kollam and it belonged to his great grandfather. 10 years ago Lord Tomson sold it to Mr. Hilly for his stupidity and drunken. Because he ran out of cash to buy a drink. His son Andy found out that he sold a precious thing from his ancestry. They believed that the golden amulet has a power to create a parallel world. Roger who is live in a wealthy family and has a hi-end class in town. “You know how to use it, didn’t you?” said Roger. Andy felt his head spinning and cannot remember anything. He said “I don’t know what you mean, it just an ordinary amulet thing and I don’t have it.” He really good at lying. “I know you stole it from my house last night! Don’t you dare lie to me, son of a farmer!”
Mr. Hilly heard the noise and he peeked in to see what was happening inside. They were inside arguing. Then Mr. Hilly saw them with shocked and horridly ran to Andy, helping him untied. “What wrong with you Roger!” Roger sighed “I know him well that he stole our golden amulet from our house last night dad!” Mr. Hilly paused then said “That night we have a dinner together with Mr. Tomson and Andy and I didn’t see them or anyone goes upstairs.” Mr. Hilly pulled out of his pocket and reveal his golden amulet to show it to him. “See? It hasn’t been stolen from anyone.” Said Mr. Hilly with bashfulness and Andy stunned for a minute and he thought how would that be? It is two of them or just a copycat? "Hmm... Mr. Hilly can you don't tell my dad about this, please?" Said Andy. And Mr. Hilly nodded.