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คำถาม : A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
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The community, where I live, is very nice and quiet. Therefore, when the company announces its project to build a new factory. Our residents are concerned about it. Some welcome enthusiastically while others oppose the plan strongly.
On one hand, having a new factory near our community would bring more jobs and better business opportunities. Teenager, adult, and even elderly in my community would be able to apply for the job at the new factory. During construction, people can apply for wright position. When the plant completely set up, people can apply for various positions at the new factory such as workers, managers, guards, and etc. The new factory can offer more job, therefore people in my community gain more income. The more income we have, the better life we are.
On the other hand, constructing the new plant would produce pollution problem. First, air pollution can occur because of chaotic dust at construction sites. Furthermore, if the factory is not concern about wastewater treatment before release to public water resource, water pollution can happen. These causes environmental degradation which will lead to health problems of people in the community in the future.
Having tried to predict the future lifestyle of my neighbors, I would certainly support setting up a new factory. I can foresee that the new factory would bring more jobs and better business opportunities. With the generous offer from a company to build a new plant in our community, who can still resist this great plan.
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คำถาม : A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
คำตอบ :
The community, where I live, is very nice and quiet. Therefore, when the company announces its project to build a new factory. Our residents are concerned about it. Some welcome enthusiastically while others oppose the plan strongly.
On one hand, having a new factory near our community would bring more jobs and better business opportunities. Teenager, adult, and even elderly in my community would be able to apply for the job at the new factory. During construction, people can apply for wright position. When the plant completely set up, people can apply for various positions at the new factory such as workers, managers, guards, and etc. The new factory can offer more job, therefore people in my community gain more income. The more income we have, the better life we are.
On the other hand, constructing the new plant would produce pollution problem. First, air pollution can occur because of chaotic dust at construction sites. Furthermore, if the factory is not concern about wastewater treatment before release to public water resource, water pollution can happen. These causes environmental degradation which will lead to health problems of people in the community in the future.
Having tried to predict the future lifestyle of my neighbors, I would certainly support setting up a new factory. I can foresee that the new factory would bring more jobs and better business opportunities. With the generous offer from a company to build a new plant in our community, who can still resist this great plan.
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