รบกวนช่วยตรวจสอบความถูกต้องให้ทีค่ะ เราลองแต่งWriting เอง แต่งเรื่องนี้เป็นครั้งแรกเลยไม่ค่อยมั่นใจเลยค่ะ
เรื่อง The effect of going to bed late
Today,We have an activity to do during the day.Whether for work,study,travel,and socialize.
Have less leisure more sleep.Especially among young teens.Usually sleep of reading,homework,playing games
and social networks.Therefore,we do not get adequate rest.The symptoms are blurred,the perceived slow response,
May be amnesia easily.Body and skin look dull.Affect learning or even working make no concentration.The body fatigue,
unhealthy,A simple illness.And fat because the body 's secretion of cortisol released,cause to feel hungry easily.
It can be seen that sleep is not good for us.We should sleep 8-9 hours a day.In order to meet the body.So we have to
modify their own behavior.By not sleep more than ten. The good health of our own.
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ช่วยทีค่ะ เรื่องCause and Effect
เรื่อง The effect of going to bed late
Today,We have an activity to do during the day.Whether for work,study,travel,and socialize.
Have less leisure more sleep.Especially among young teens.Usually sleep of reading,homework,playing games
and social networks.Therefore,we do not get adequate rest.The symptoms are blurred,the perceived slow response,
May be amnesia easily.Body and skin look dull.Affect learning or even working make no concentration.The body fatigue,
unhealthy,A simple illness.And fat because the body 's secretion of cortisol released,cause to feel hungry easily.
It can be seen that sleep is not good for us.We should sleep 8-9 hours a day.In order to meet the body.So we have to
modify their own behavior.By not sleep more than ten. The good health of our own.
ขอบคุณทุกคนมากนะค่ะ ที่ช่วยกัน