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Which country do you like to visit? Why?

       Singapore is a great country to visit for two reasons. First of all, the country has a lot of beautiful places for everybody to visit. For example, the Merlion that has the head of a lion and the body of a fish. The iconic Merlion statue with water spouting from its mouth resides at the waterfront Merlion Park. I think everybody have probably seen images of Singapore’s national icon. This icon is a ‘must-see’ for tourists visiting Singapore, similar to other significant landmarks around the world. The statue could no longer be viewed clearly from the waterfront and I want to go once in my life to see that. Second, Singapore has a fun place that everybody known better. For instance, Universal Studios Singapore is imaginable and wonderful place. I want to see amazed as the Hollywood Dreams Parade and I want to meet Elmo, is a Muppet character of Sesame Street that is my favourite cartoon. There are many fun activities in this such as Enchanted Airways, Transformer, Roller Coasters, and etc to enjoy. I think it is the first place that I want to see if I can go there. Singapore is the best spectacular place if you want to have a new experience.
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