ช่วยตรวจดู essay เกี่ยวกับ bule-footed boody ให้ผมทีครับ

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         Nowadays,There are a lot of bird species on our planet. Even though there are a lot of birds in the world,you should know that there are some birds that are very  rare. For example,the birds is called Blue-Footed Booby. So,today i will explain about unique characteristics of Blue-Footed Booby.The appearance of birds is a large and rather funny-looking seabird,it is a coastal species,and status of birds tend to become endangered.
          The blue-footed booby is a large and rather funny-looking seabird .they are unique bird species because it has bright blue webbed feet,long,neck,brown wings,its head and neck are brown with black streaks ,and Its chest and undersides are white. The female blue-footed booby is similar in appearance to the male,but The female is larger than the male.Moreover,The name booby comes from the Spanish word ‘bobo’ meaning ‘fool’ due to reference to their clumsiness on land
          The blue-footed booby lives off the western coasts of central ,and south America,the Galapagos Islands. It eats fish such as sardines,mackerel,flying fish,They are excellent hunters, spotting victim on the wing and plunging head first into the ocean from a height of up to 30 metres in order to catch it. Moreover,during breeding season, Male and female pairs will mate for many years. It nests on cliffs or areas with little vegetation and it lays two or three pale blue or green eggs.then,The eggs take about 45 days to hatch.
           The blue-footed booby still is threatened by human activities such as fishing and the effects of global warming. In addition,In the Galapagos islands is becoming a popular place for tourism,so it make islands increase pollution. As a result of this cause,The blue-footed tend to become endangered
                In conclusion,I explained unique characteristics of Blue-Footed Booby in order to tell everything that you do not know about Blue-Footed Booby such as The appearance of birds,it is a coastal species,and it tend to become endangered.


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