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Title:     Effects of an Optimistic Outlook on Our lives

1. Introduction
    1.1) A fast-changing world may be a cause of chaos and stress you have to encounter. An optimistic outlook can help you be happy and change the outcome of your life.
    1.2) An optimistic outlook can be a factor in enriching your relationship, improving your health, and solving problems easily.
2. Body Paragraphs
    2.1) Effect 1:         Being optimistic leads you to find happiness in professional and personal relationships.
    2.1.1) Support 1:     - Having a positive attitude will help you find a good job and keep it.
    2.1.2) Support 2:    - Happiness and a positive outlook on life can also have beneficial effect on personal relationships.
    2.2) Effect 2:        Having an optimistic point of view will result in making a person healthy.
    2.2.1) Support 1:    - Medical science has proven that stress, heart disease and cancer, can be avoided when people feel good about themselves.
    2.2.2) Support 2:    - It has been found that the elderly recover faster from illness when they are cheerful.
    2.3) Effect 3:        Having an optimistic power  in order  to be successful
    2.3.1) Support 1:    - The inspire will help you the creative power of thought ,It’s a way of life to overcome failure
    2.3.2) Support 2:    - The motivation for the work is to be ready for your opportunity when it comes   so  that's the secret of success.
3. Conclusion
    3.1)  Have confidence that they can do almost everything. If anything new had expected to succeed.
    3.2) To look at obstacles as challenges him to improve himself. Because  everything is possible



Effects of an Optimistic Outlook on Our


1.1) A fast-changing world may be a cause of chaos and stress you have to encounter. An optimistic outlook can help you be happy and change the outcome of your life Will can you handle stress and problems that occur easily.  1.2) An optimistic outlook can be a factor in enriching your relationship, improving your health, and do you have the power to do everythings to be successful.
2.1) First, being optimistic leads you to find happiness in professional and personal relationships. (2.1.1) Having a positive attitude will help you find a good job and keep it. As  a consequence  will  come to make you happy with your work and efforts to accomplish that task. (2.1.2) Happiness and a positive outlook on life can also have beneficial effect on personal positive relationships. Because it makes you able to work or live with others in the society can be happy.
    2.2) Second, having an optimistic point of view will result in making a person healthy. มี(2.2.1) Medical science has proven that stress, heart disease and cancer, can be avoided when people feel good about themselves.Because it will allow you to easily manage stress and emotional well. 2.2.2) Having an optimistic rehabilitation of illness.It has been found that the elderly recover faster from illness when they are cheerful .Because the immune cells and can prevent threats diseases.
2.3) Finally, Having an optimistic power in  order  to  successful (2.3.1 The inspire will help you the creative power of thought ,It’s a way of life to overcome failure.It will contribute to the achievement of the goals and lead to  a compliment to you. (2.3.2) The motivation for the work is to be ready for your opportunity when it comes   so  that's the secret of success. If you lack the motivation to work, As a result  you will don’t  have the power to overcome the barriers .
In conclusion optimism is  3.1)  Have confidence that I can do almost everything. And if something new It is expected to succeed are the ones who are happy. And are less stressed He is healthy 3.2) The optimistic to look at obstacles as challenges him to improve himself. In order  to  everything is possible, So he is more than happy and brave decision to brave risks and greater success.
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