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ดังนั้นขอแนะนำตัวก่อนนะคะ หนูอายุ 17 ปีค่ะ ตอนนี้กำลังพยายามอย่างมากกกในการเขียน essay เพราะว่าหนูกำลังจะสอบเข้าอักษรภาคอินเตอร์ของจุฬา และ bec bas ของ มธ และหนูไม่เคยไปต่างประเทศหรือเรียนอินเตอร์มาก่อนเลยทำให้ด้อยประสบการ์ณมาก
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Theme: discuss pros and cons of legalizing prostitution
Prostitution is one of the oldest professions and exists sustainably in our society without legalizing.Although becoming prostitutes is risky in health and reputation,many women choose to do it because of economic reasons and the lack of opportunity to get better work.As prostitution is one of the national problems of some countries such as Thailand,legalizing it will be the solution.Conversely,it will worsen the situation as well.
Legitimating prostitution will lead to 3 obvious advantages.First,making prostitution legal will rise the nation‘s income from imposing a tax from prostitutes.Second,the condition of a prostitute will be improved on health and sanitation.Third,the government will be able to create the criteria of age norm of prostitutes.In short,the sanction of prostitution will benefit to country and prostitutes’ subsistence.
However,legitimating prostitution still cannot better its conditions and will aggravate feminists’ objection or one who protect humans’ rights.First,approving prostitution to be lawful is one of the ways to support and increase humans’ trafficking and women exploitation.Second,prostitution will become the alternative of unemployed person.Also,it will create the aspect to girls that they do not have to make an effort in studying to get a high salary job.Third,if prostitution becomes lawful ,the numbers of prostitutes will greatly increase which will lead a country to the overwhelming rate of HIV patients and other contagious sexual diseases.To sum up,legalizing prostitution will not only increase the tasks that the government cannot handle but also implicitly embed the wrong attitude toward women and girls.
Although prostitution is one of the most selected choices of women lacking chances and education,in fact,it cannot improve their lives and will gradually destroy their opportunities to reach a better society. Moreover,facing the oppression form employers,insulting from others,and suffering from sex abusive will considerably harm their mental and health.Therefore,even though legalizing prostitution will make some benefits,it will decline the value of our society and women’s rights as well as profoundly effect the misbelief to the next female generation.
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ดังนั้นขอแนะนำตัวก่อนนะคะ หนูอายุ 17 ปีค่ะ ตอนนี้กำลังพยายามอย่างมากกกในการเขียน essay เพราะว่าหนูกำลังจะสอบเข้าอักษรภาคอินเตอร์ของจุฬา และ bec bas ของ มธ และหนูไม่เคยไปต่างประเทศหรือเรียนอินเตอร์มาก่อนเลยทำให้ด้อยประสบการ์ณมาก
ปล.ขอบคุณทุกความเห็นล่วงหน้านะคะะ
Theme: discuss pros and cons of legalizing prostitution
Prostitution is one of the oldest professions and exists sustainably in our society without legalizing.Although becoming prostitutes is risky in health and reputation,many women choose to do it because of economic reasons and the lack of opportunity to get better work.As prostitution is one of the national problems of some countries such as Thailand,legalizing it will be the solution.Conversely,it will worsen the situation as well.
Legitimating prostitution will lead to 3 obvious advantages.First,making prostitution legal will rise the nation‘s income from imposing a tax from prostitutes.Second,the condition of a prostitute will be improved on health and sanitation.Third,the government will be able to create the criteria of age norm of prostitutes.In short,the sanction of prostitution will benefit to country and prostitutes’ subsistence.
However,legitimating prostitution still cannot better its conditions and will aggravate feminists’ objection or one who protect humans’ rights.First,approving prostitution to be lawful is one of the ways to support and increase humans’ trafficking and women exploitation.Second,prostitution will become the alternative of unemployed person.Also,it will create the aspect to girls that they do not have to make an effort in studying to get a high salary job.Third,if prostitution becomes lawful ,the numbers of prostitutes will greatly increase which will lead a country to the overwhelming rate of HIV patients and other contagious sexual diseases.To sum up,legalizing prostitution will not only increase the tasks that the government cannot handle but also implicitly embed the wrong attitude toward women and girls.
Although prostitution is one of the most selected choices of women lacking chances and education,in fact,it cannot improve their lives and will gradually destroy their opportunities to reach a better society. Moreover,facing the oppression form employers,insulting from others,and suffering from sex abusive will considerably harm their mental and health.Therefore,even though legalizing prostitution will make some benefits,it will decline the value of our society and women’s rights as well as profoundly effect the misbelief to the next female generation.