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Q: Do you think English is important in your life? Explain with at least two supporting reasons.

             Yes, I do think that English is very important in my life, particularly since I am graduating and about to look for a job.
       My first supporting reason is that English will give me more chance to get a good job. As we all know that there are many international firms nowadays locating in Thailand, such as Exxon mobile, Toyota, Chevron and etc. and they all require and accept only candidates with a good English skill - measured by the TOEIC score. Therefore, I will surely get a good job as well as a good pay if my English is well enough to qualify for those firms mentioned earlier. My second supporting reason is that English not only help enhance my point of view but also broaden my world. It is quite true for me that nowadays English movies tend to conquer the world as I have witnessed the top-ten chart movies of box office that make the highest profit and are watched round the globe are all in English. As a consequence I not only watch them for fun but also learn and gain lots of knowledge in many aspect from them, for example I get to see many beautiful places I have never seen in my life, to learn how they use their ways of language to communicate and play jokes, how do they live- what theirs houses are like and etc..

      In conclusion, I truly believe that English is very important in my life because If I learn and can use it well, I will definitely get a good job at an International companies as well as enjoy watching and learning many things from the English movies ^_^

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