ผมเริ่มฝึกเขียน Essay ครั้งแรก วานผู้รู้ช่วย Comment ให้หน่อยครับ เต็มที่เลย อยากปรับปรุง Writing skill มากๆ
ผมเขียนเกี่ยวกับราคาน้ำมันโลก เพราะชอบเรื่องเศรษฐกิจ เลยเลือกเรื่องทางนี้
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Almost six months, oil price dropped below 100$. Non-OPEC group that rely exported oil was down of economic already, actually world economic growth rated have been raising less than forecast all the time after crisis in 2009.
Today big imported energy in the past, US changed to export to energy market. The reason that found new method, hydraulic fracking , to survey and drilling shelf oil under the rock. OPEC group , 40% market share must action to keep their proportion, thus they produce oil over demand is necessary. Some country in group didn’t agree with settlement because they have to maintain their revenue first. They rely mainly balancing income from exported energy, however the rich country such as Saudi Arabia, UAE may be not effected with dropped price due to low capital and long time running.
By the way, the country that probably effected directly, Russia similarly exported energy. Currency was tumble immediately in a week even if president tell their people arrive cold season oil price will rebound and come back higher than this time. Later, Russian Central bank announce the new higher deposit rate, Ruble down against dollar continually.
Nobody known how much is stable oil price, but imported energy country got a profitability exactly.
เรื่องนี้ผมแต่งเอาตามที่อยากใช้ศัพท์ อยากใช้ Grammar นะครับ
อยากไปสนใจ fact นะครับ มีโครงเรื่องจริงบ้างแต่งตามใจบ้าง
ขอบคุณล่วงหน้าก่อนเลยครับ
รบกวนช่วยตรวจ Essay ให้หน่อยครับ
ผมเขียนเกี่ยวกับราคาน้ำมันโลก เพราะชอบเรื่องเศรษฐกิจ เลยเลือกเรื่องทางนี้
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Almost six months, oil price dropped below 100$. Non-OPEC group that rely exported oil was down of economic already, actually world economic growth rated have been raising less than forecast all the time after crisis in 2009.
Today big imported energy in the past, US changed to export to energy market. The reason that found new method, hydraulic fracking , to survey and drilling shelf oil under the rock. OPEC group , 40% market share must action to keep their proportion, thus they produce oil over demand is necessary. Some country in group didn’t agree with settlement because they have to maintain their revenue first. They rely mainly balancing income from exported energy, however the rich country such as Saudi Arabia, UAE may be not effected with dropped price due to low capital and long time running.
By the way, the country that probably effected directly, Russia similarly exported energy. Currency was tumble immediately in a week even if president tell their people arrive cold season oil price will rebound and come back higher than this time. Later, Russian Central bank announce the new higher deposit rate, Ruble down against dollar continually.
Nobody known how much is stable oil price, but imported energy country got a profitability exactly.
เรื่องนี้ผมแต่งเอาตามที่อยากใช้ศัพท์ อยากใช้ Grammar นะครับ
อยากไปสนใจ fact นะครับ มีโครงเรื่องจริงบ้างแต่งตามใจบ้าง
ขอบคุณล่วงหน้าก่อนเลยครับ