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What it takes to make leadership
The first thing I would like to say is “thank you.” Not only has (University) given me an extraordinary honor, but the chance to being here and ask you a question. What it takes to make leadership? One said “history always tells you what is going on now and what is about to happen.” Then I looked back in the past and searched who were the great leaders. I have come up with many such as Margaret Thatcher, Mahatma Gandhi, Nelson Mandela, and etc. Actually, I have wracked my mind and heart for what I ought to say to you today. I have asked myself what I wish to discover from them. Suddenly, I realized that those people had one thing in common. They were all respectable and admirable which became my answer. Reverence is a desirable competency for leadership. By the way, leadership is not a noun. It is a verb. It is acting and moving. It is what you have done to make people respect in you. In this content, what you have done means your achievements and accomplishments that require you the following things.

The end is the aim. Therefore you have to plan since the beginning, consider the possible obstacles and turning points that may lead you to the opposite termination. 415 BC, the Athens attempted to conquer Sicily due to believing in their power. Unfortunately, their leader did not plan the strategy carefully, He did not think about the distance between Athens and the island that would debilitate the army. He elided the old enemies of Athens that might attack during the long march. The impact of the defeat was immense. The Athens was lost in a single stroke. The trimming led to the end of the biggest civilization of the world.

To be proficient in time is the next thing. The rhythm of time is really important in the game. Waiting is not only controlling your emotion, but also your adherents. They may convince you to decide something immediately which may cause problems later. This situation normally appears in the wild. Wild animals always have their leader to control the pack and forage the food. While hunting, the leader will wait until the right time to attack the prey because they know that their pack will have to starve unless they move in the wrong time.

Performance is the art of leadership. You have to realize that being a leader you have to be a good performer. In critical situation, you have to control your emotion and sensation. Being a chief, you cannot cry when your army is beaten or your company faces the recession. Leader who always shows their sensation in front of the public will get some sympathy first. Anyhow, it will turn to be boredom at the end. Furthermore, you have to know how to perform many roles. Having the same style all the time likes you make foe a way to kill you. In the war, once the pattern was used, it cannot use again. The heart is which one of the leaders is better to apply the new tactic.

The moment of success is exactly the moment of jeopardy. Among the vehemence of victory, the arrogant and confident will push you to span the real goal. All the things will disappear if you do not know when to stop. The reason why the leader of Athens decided to assault Sicily is the victory of Athens above Persia. Without sufficiency, he led Athens to the terrible doom.

The tactics above are the ways to make you win the games you play as a leader and make you a legend. Being the legend, the followers will follow you from their heart and soul. They respect you from who you are. Whenever you have this kind of followers, the world is in your hand. If the world is in your hand, the global stage is not that hard.

On behalf of a normal university student I would like to give my special thanks to Mr. History. He has given me all the information I referred. I will not realize that we should plan before doing something in order to make it complete if Athens did not lose the war. I will not know the importance of time if the history of animal does not happen like the way it is. I will not know the abilities of performance if the wars did not happen. I will not aware of sufficiency if Athens did not end with the doom. What I would like to say is the eyes of leadership are not only for future, but the past.
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