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ว่ามันผิดตรงไหนบ้างครับ จะได้พัฒนาตัวเองถูกคร้าบบบ
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Do you like living in a city or countryside. (150-200 words) ครับ
Joyfulness and convenience are the reasons that make many people love to live in a city. In the contrary there are the same two reasons that make me prefer to live in the countryside too.
First, The meaning of joyfulness is the personal preference, as many people love to enjoy dazzlingly life such as going to nightclub or big shopping market. I prefer enjoying with clammily life such as inhaling the fresh air or watching the star in clear sky with my girlfriend, which can not easily found in a city. So these made countryside more suite for me.
Second, as many people love to live in a city because of convenience to their works. But it is not problems for me. Because, nowadays the communication technology has been developed. I can make a meeting with my co-workers, team, even my boss through video conference. I can do every monetary duty and even access an important office asset through internet. So it is not the problem for me anymore on this topic.
Above two reasons that made me love to live in the countryside more than living in a city.
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ว่ามันผิดตรงไหนบ้างครับ จะได้พัฒนาตัวเองถูกคร้าบบบ
ขอบคุณทุกท่านมากๆครับ
หัวข้อ
Do you like living in a city or countryside. (150-200 words) ครับ
Joyfulness and convenience are the reasons that make many people love to live in a city. In the contrary there are the same two reasons that make me prefer to live in the countryside too.
First, The meaning of joyfulness is the personal preference, as many people love to enjoy dazzlingly life such as going to nightclub or big shopping market. I prefer enjoying with clammily life such as inhaling the fresh air or watching the star in clear sky with my girlfriend, which can not easily found in a city. So these made countryside more suite for me.
Second, as many people love to live in a city because of convenience to their works. But it is not problems for me. Because, nowadays the communication technology has been developed. I can make a meeting with my co-workers, team, even my boss through video conference. I can do every monetary duty and even access an important office asset through internet. So it is not the problem for me anymore on this topic.
Above two reasons that made me love to live in the countryside more than living in a city.