อยากขอให้ช่วยเรียบเรียงภาษาให้สวยงาม และช่วยตรวจแกรมม่าให้หน่อยค่ะ หรือใครมีอะไรเพิ่มเติมช่วยแนะนำด้วยนะคะ ขอบคุณค่ะ
There are three primarily goals in my life. I would like to achieve my personal, academic and career goals. My personal goal is to have a stable for my life and have a better future. Happiness in what I do is also my goal in life. My academic goal is to pursue Doctoral degree with a focus in Geology. As for my career goal. I would like to have a good job that makes me happy and that brings a stable income to support my family and help people. I would love to be a surveyor. I like learning and exploring new things. It would be great to travel the world, and I really enjoy meeting and working with a lot of different people. Furthermore, I want to improve my coraperated skill with my colleague, and do enjoy team working. My job would be a constant adventure and learning experience that would keep me challenged and fulfilled. Moreover, the work which I can help the people and develop usefully manmade to other people, too.
ขอความช่วยเหลือคนเก่งภาษาอังกฤษหน่อยค่ะ ช่วยเรียบเรียงภาษาให้สวยงามให้หน่อยค่ะ
There are three primarily goals in my life. I would like to achieve my personal, academic and career goals. My personal goal is to have a stable for my life and have a better future. Happiness in what I do is also my goal in life. My academic goal is to pursue Doctoral degree with a focus in Geology. As for my career goal. I would like to have a good job that makes me happy and that brings a stable income to support my family and help people. I would love to be a surveyor. I like learning and exploring new things. It would be great to travel the world, and I really enjoy meeting and working with a lot of different people. Furthermore, I want to improve my coraperated skill with my colleague, and do enjoy team working. My job would be a constant adventure and learning experience that would keep me challenged and fulfilled. Moreover, the work which I can help the people and develop usefully manmade to other people, too.