สวัสดีค่ะ คือ เราต้องเขียนสรุปการไปเยี่ยมบ้านเด็กตาบอด ของบริษัทเพื่อตีพิมพ์ในนิตยสาร รบกวนช่วยเช็คแกรมม่าหน่อยนะคะ ภาษาเราแบบแย่มากๆ ตอนนี้
**company name visited the blind home
On July 18th 2014, Mr.***** , President of *****and staff visited to Blind home or The Christian Foundation for the Blind in Thailand (CFBT) at Bangkok of Thailand. There are have 70 children who are blind and age around 2-15 years at present. Mostly Blindness is a disability that comes from birth.
The visit is a part one of *** 21st anniversary established day. This place is school and home for blind children at the same. In Thailand are many problems for visually impaired and blind people in society, they faces many type of barrier in performing everyday life. Children are fulfill of warmth, learning and how to help yourself from here. In some occasion have many volunteer to make activity with the children which is part one of motivation and make a happiness to their life.
*** คือต้องปิดข้อมูลไว้หน่อยนะคะ
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ช่วยเช็คแกรมม่าหน่อยนะคะ เขียนบทความสั้นๆลงนิตยสารค่ะ
**company name visited the blind home
On July 18th 2014, Mr.***** , President of *****and staff visited to Blind home or The Christian Foundation for the Blind in Thailand (CFBT) at Bangkok of Thailand. There are have 70 children who are blind and age around 2-15 years at present. Mostly Blindness is a disability that comes from birth.
The visit is a part one of *** 21st anniversary established day. This place is school and home for blind children at the same. In Thailand are many problems for visually impaired and blind people in society, they faces many type of barrier in performing everyday life. Children are fulfill of warmth, learning and how to help yourself from here. In some occasion have many volunteer to make activity with the children which is part one of motivation and make a happiness to their life.
*** คือต้องปิดข้อมูลไว้หน่อยนะคะ
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