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I would like to Machu Picchu,where is in Peru. Machu Picchu is the one of seven wonders.It was created by Ica people. It has been built for more than ten thousand years.The place where is in deep mountain for prevent other foreign trespass. When Spanish people trespassed Peru,they couldn't find Machu Picchu because where is in very deepest mountain. The place where was for Ica people living,farm,feeding animal. they built many field on the mountain,make it shape like step ladder . They built step ladder because it is easier than normal plan. It helps for plant. It looks amazing,how did people build it. I want to see it by myself . The scenery there is so beautiful. There are mountain,fog,grass and cold. I would enjoy cold weather very much.I would stay there for 1 week.
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I would like to go to Machu Picchu. It is in Peru. Machu Picchu is one of the seven wonders. It was built by the Incas. It had been built more than ten thousand years ago.The place locates deep in the mountains to prevent foreign trespassers. When the Spaniards invaded Peru, they couldn't find Machu Picchu because it was hidden too deep in the mountains. It was the place where the Incas lived, farmed, fed animals. They built many fields on the mountains, made it shaped like step ladders. They built step ladders because it was easier (to do what?) than normal plains. It was good for planting. It looks amazing. How did people manage to build it that way? I want to see it by myself . The scenery there is so beautiful. There are mountains, fog, grass and cold. (ตรงนี้มันหลาย categories มาไว้ในประโยคเดียวกัน เลยดูแปลกๆ ค่ะ mountain กับ fog แล้วก็ cold นี่คนละเรื่องกันเลย) I would enjoy cold weather very much .I would stay there for 1 week.
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