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The pie charts show the trend of using sources of energy in the USA between 1980 and 10 years later.

Overall, demanding coal and nuclear power were upward by dropped in consumption of natural gas and oil.Another sources, hydroelectric power, remained constant.

In detail, it is clear that oil made up the most popular source in the USA in both years.Oil accounted for 42% of spending in1980, but this declined to 33% in 1990.However, the required energy for hydroelectric power was not urged, remained constant at 5%.

Other areas changed significantly.The proportion on nuclear power doubled, climbing from 5% to 10%.The percentage of consumption of natural increased gradually, up from 22% in 1980 to 27% in 1990.However, the percentage of natural gas dropped slightly from 26% to 25%.

Clearly, the trends for the main sources of energy for USA  shows that  oil is the largest sources followed by coal and natural gas are the second. Nevertheless,hydroelectric power has not been prospering.
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