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Motivation Letter
    In this motivation letter I would like to introduce myself and motivate why I would like to participate Farm practice program at ..... Japan.
    My name is ..... I am a twenty-two years old girl. I study in ........ Bangkok, Thailand.  In next academic year, I am going to be a senior student. It means that I only have one year left before graduate from here, so I want to spend it as worth as possible. Lately, I saw an announcement of Farm practice program at ...., Japan. It mentioned that students who were selected by ... are needed to pay only for ticket fly. Sincerely, that was very attracting at first. After I saw that I didn’t have any hesitate to apply the program because an opportunity already came in front of me, and I am a kind of person that won’t let it go unless I don’t try my best first.
    There are the reasons that motivate me want to participate Farm practice program at ...., Japan. First, I am very curious to know what’s different of Farm practice program between Thai and Japan. I had farm practice experiences in Thai before. Thus I will be able to compare what’s different in order to present to constructors, they may adjust some Japanese techniques for farm practice in Thai. Second, my friend who participated to this program last year is the one of my motivation. I followed up all her updated when she was in Farm practice program at ..., Japan. She looked really enjoyed living there and showed some agricultural technology photos that I had never seen before. That made me having strong interest to apply this program because I also want to make that experience to be my own. Third, this program will be my great chance to meet new friends and learn more in Japanese culture, language and their living style. Also I will be able to see more beautiful places in Japan; therefore I don’t have any reason not to try applying this program. I really do hope I will be able to spend my time participate this Farm practice program. It will be ever worth for me.
Sincerely
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I would like to introduce myself and the reasons why I would like to participate in Farm practice program at ..... in Japan.
    My name is ..... I am a 22-year-old girl. I study in ........ Bangkok, Thailand.  In the next academic year, I will be a senior student. It means I have one year left before graduation. I want to spend the year fruitfully as much  as possible. I see an announcement of Farm practice program at ...., in Japan that students who are selected by ...need to pay only flight tickets. I am immediately interested and have no hesitation to apply to participate in the program. I am the kind of person who won’t let a good opportunity slip by without doing by best to grasp it.
    Why I want to participate in Farm practice program at ...., in Japan?  
    I want to know how Farm practice in Japan differ from Thailand. I have had some farm practice experiences here in Thailand. It will be a chance for me to learn the best practice over there and the knowledge gained can be spread here locally.
    My friend who participated in this program last year gave me a good motivation. I followed up all her updates when she was in Farm practice program at ..., in Japan. She enjoyed living there and showed some agricultural technology photos that I had never seen before. I want to experience this first hand as well.
   Also, through this program I will meet new friends and learn Japanese language and culture. I hope to visit many beautiful places in Japan as well.
   I really do hope that I will be selected to participate in this Farm practice program. The experience should provide me with the great memory that I will treasure throughout my life.
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