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          There are generally four seasons in the most of country in the world: winter, summer, autumn, and spring. But there are different from my country. I live in Bangkok, the capital city of Thailand. Thailand is usually hot and humid because an effect from tropical monsoons and tropical region. There are three seasons in Thailand: winter, summer, and rain. Every season has its own advantages.
          Wintertime is the best time to visit Bangkok, exactly Thailand, because there are many beautiful day with sunshine that is worm and dry. The beginning of winter is on November to February. However, cold weather is only two or three weeks in late December to early January. During the evening, the temperatures are drop below 20 degrees Celsius. This is cool for the foreigners but cold for us.
          Summertime is very hot for everyone. The hot weather starts around March and goes on to April. In April, the temperatures can go up to the 40 degrees Celsius. Many people like to go to the beach to sunbathe in summer. Songkran day, Thai traditional New Year, is the popular festival that starts on April 13 every year and lasts for 3 days. People throw water to each other. It is really fun and everyone is very happy.  
          Rainy season is dominated by southwest monsoon. The damp and moisture is lasts from July to October. Thunderstorm occurs in the late afternoon or early evening. Some areas in Bangkok are flooding. There are traffic jams everywhere. Travel around Bangkok at this time is not a good idea. Good point of rainy season is plants grow well. Farmers enjoy this season because it makes them better crops.
          The best season in Bangkok is winter. People can travel among a sunshine day. Summer is too hot but people can enjoy sunbathing at the beach. Finally, rainy season is damp and moisture. Minority likes the rain except the agriculturist.
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